My Opera is closing 1st of March

Natural Law 19

Thursday, May 7, 2009 8:35:26 AM

Love 1


Don't get dirty, please come
Don't take vodka, whisky and rum.
Don't take cocaine, don't over dose
You still my best, like a rose.

I look for you by internet and phone
Because, I don't want to be alone!
Sweetheart, are you somewhere closer
I love you, please listen and hear?

Come to me for hugging me deep
In closing eyes and lip on lip.
I love you, I love you, oh my dear
Closer and closer, come to near.

Please don't get drunk and Intoxicate
You will be losing the most favorite.
Once you run and go to them
You will destroy name and fame.

Don't get dirty, please come
Don't take vodka, whisky and rum.
Don't take cocaine, don't over dose
You still my best, like a rose.

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Comments

virmarytorres2 Friday, May 8, 2009 12:58:25 AM

Chanmok; Well you have done it again, and I thought you said you did not have time for more poems. smile. Everything flows so nice, however why some of the words such as cocaine,vodka, and whisky, and what is ram? :0

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Friday, May 8, 2009 2:32:22 AM

It is RUM, not ram. I am sorry. Thanks for the correction.

virmarytorres2 Saturday, May 9, 2009 12:37:21 AM

Oh, got it, yeah I understand what you mean, thanks smile

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Saturday, May 9, 2009 6:49:03 AM

yes up I am glad that I could put the correct spelling.Thanks to you.

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