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Natural law 29

My voice is for you
July 6th 2009


You like my poems and it's my pride
My penning for folks world wide!
I speak for us, my voice there
For life, plants and for agriculture!

I am a simple man for vast humans
You sure love my ongoing actions!
More you read, more my rhymes
More, I am blessed in all times!

Who wants fancies with hard meaning
Their annoying words, rude ringing!
Moody pundits non-democratic style
So, you appreciate me and my smile!

Doctor's writings and court's language
All seem difficult garbage wastage!
They write toxics and give us pollution
My ideas are simple, normal education!

Nothing is impossible if we try
To ease pains, to stop cry!
To restore living of pre historic old
For state of nature we need to be bold!

It's not a joke to keep penning
For peoples causes, in such amusing!
Unique fight with a natural math
In our one life time, a newer path!

You like poems and it's my pride
My penning for folks world wide!
I speak for us, my voice there
For life, plants and for agriculture!

Natural Law 28NATURAL LAW 30

Comments

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Tuesday, July 14, 2009 9:20:06 PM

Wulpen: My dear friend, you made me happy by liking my poem. I am glad you enjoyed!

virmarytorres2 Wednesday, July 15, 2009 12:16:23 AM

Well chanmok, you do know how to express yourself and how the world feels [at least that is how I see it]. It surely would be nice if when a person read this poem would take it to heart and read between the lines. Thanks for sharing. happy

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Wednesday, July 15, 2009 12:50:00 AM

Originally posted by virmarytorres2:

It surely would be nice if when a person read this poem would take it to heart and read between the lines.



My friend virmarytorres2, I said what I said. I am so honored in your precious comment!

virmarytorres2 Wednesday, July 15, 2009 1:03:47 AM

Well the way I read I always try to read between the lines, because no matter what anyone says there is always a message, and you always have a message to give. It is just sad when others do not take it to heart either because the do not want to believe we re in such bad shape or they are to scare that they rather keep to themselves and avoid listening to anyone.Tat it is sad part. By the time they wake up it might be to late.

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Wednesday, July 15, 2009 2:06:49 AM

There are many who got different interests than reading poetries. Also, there are too many different type of poetries. Poetry lovers are also divided in their choices. Mine are with a different juice with a newer politics. That's all. You are a keen observer and a mind reader. Thank you for your attention to me.

virmarytorres2 Wednesday, July 15, 2009 2:20:49 AM

My keyboard is not working right. I need to pay attention more, otherwise I will be doing a lot of misspelling. Oh I know there are different types of poetries,however sometimes poetry does have a message whether is about politics, hunger, economy, peace, religion,love, etc,etc,etc, Those who write poetry usually do have a message. Don't you think? angel

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Wednesday, July 15, 2009 4:07:47 AM

You are hundred percent right. Certainly, my poems got messages which my beloved readers do notice. I don't write to make money but to establish my opinions and agendas. Mostly, I am a critic of Governmental gangs, goons and anti social elements what lead humans to ill politics, hunger, war and violence, religious bigotry etc.etc.etc. angel bigsmile

virmarytorres2 Wednesday, July 15, 2009 10:45:56 PM

Thank God for the FREEDOM OF SPEECH. Sometimes we take things for granted,we can express ourselves in so many different ways that sometimes I think we abuse it. OK I'm playing the Devil's Advocate. Because we can express ourselves on occasions we go overboard, and things go completely out of control. A PEACEFUL DEMONSTRATION CAN TURN INTO A RIOT IN A MATTER OF SECONDS, because we as human being can not handle ourselves. So it is good to express ourselves thru our thoughts, to put them down in paper, whether by poems, songs, or a story. Just think of the possibilities. PEOPLE BEHAVING ACTUALLY LIKE HUMAN BEINGS.

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Wednesday, July 15, 2009 11:57:41 PM

What you said is true. When people get united, devils join them too. Because, I believe that devils possess human bodies to function. Only possessed humans can abuse freedom, can break peace, can hurt other individuals. Not necessarily, I subscribe to the doctrine of egoism. I even don't believe in socialism but collectivism is OK to uphold individualism. I don't want that Government will have supreme authority on us. I don't want want freedom to be controlled by the state. Here was the big difference between Karl Marx and BAKUNIN. Karl Marx sabotaged the ideology of BAKUNIN. My fellow INDIVIDUALISTS in the past thought over "physical hurting" issue. They came to a conclusion that an Individualist can only enjoy her or his freedom by not physically hurting other fellow individualists. Don't forget, individualists are not gangs or groups. They are only poor individualists who want to survive with their families, folks and tribes in peace and in harmony. Amish people are very close to Individualists. Thank you, vt2.

virmarytorres2 Thursday, July 16, 2009 12:22:00 AM

True indeed, however don't you think that @ one point we might have to unite as one body in order to succeed. After all we need to share Mother Earth. I remain hopeful. I know I'm crazy,but with hope @ least I can think and dream about tomorrow. smile

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Thursday, July 16, 2009 3:59:02 PM

Everybody can do his share individually. We need unity in our feelings, in our attitudes and in characters. It is not that we have to show up with over a million people to do a parade to save the earth. cheers

virmarytorres2 Thursday, July 16, 2009 10:55:49 PM

I did not mean that. I meant that @ one point we would,or could unite as one so our voices can be heard. I do not want to go to a PARADE. I just think that united we can conquer. confused

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Friday, July 17, 2009 1:32:20 AM

I already got your point. I understood what you meant to unite people. But in order to avoid physical violence we have to do our own individual duty. I just elaborated from different sensory perception. I have no difference in your opinion. I am cool in your uniting people for Earth Mother's cause! Thanks.smile

virmarytorres2 Friday, July 17, 2009 2:09:42 AM

OK.However I can not unite people, I do not have that power. It is my wish that at some point the HUMAN RACE will wake up and realized what they are doing.I remain hopeful. Perhaps that is my problem. I'm either ignorant,naive or a little crazy to trust in HUMANITY. It is not my intention in any way to offend you, because what you write is true. We have to preserve our individuaity, our own foundation and believes, but we still can focus our energy in doing what is good for those around us. If we can touch one person's soul and heart, why not take the chance? I do not know anymore how to explain myself. I guess when the time comes we will find out who will remain standing.

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Friday, July 17, 2009 4:58:32 AM

That's what I am talking about! Alone you can't unite people! As you said, in some point Human race will wake up. I say, we have to keep doing things to spread the message, so that each individual will understand his or her task to do the duty towards beloved Mother Earth. Each individual needs to re-possess the lost feelings for the Humanity.

virmarytorres2 Friday, July 17, 2009 11:06:05 PM

It is going to take DETERMINATON, ENERGY, HOPE, STRENGTH COURAGE, ENTHUSIASM,LOTS OF LOVE, AND PERSEVERANCE. Many, many things but I believe that if UNITED IT CAN BE DONE. Sooner or later the HUMAN RACE WILL HAVE TO REALIZE THAT WARS ARE NOT THE ANSWER. I'm just so tired of people killing each other.

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Saturday, July 18, 2009 2:09:44 AM

virmarytorres2 Said:

Originally posted by virmarytorres2:

It is going to take DETERMINATON, ENERGY, HOPE, STRENGTH COURAGE, ENTHUSIASM,LOTS OF LOVE, AND PERSEVERANCE. Many, many things but I believe that if UNITED IT CAN BE DONE. Sooner or later the HUMAN RACE WILL HAVE TO REALIZE THAT WARS ARE NOT THE ANSWER. I'm just so tired of people killing each other.



Me too sick and tired of people killing each other. By doing such, humans written constitutions are not working from the first day. Even religions failed to shape human up! The last thing we have to do is, researching, practicing and programming unwritten "NATURAL DIVINE LAW". Yes you are right. We must be united in our spirits in this!


virmarytorres2 Saturday, July 18, 2009 2:28:21 AM

Let's hope, sooner or later it will happen. smile

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Saturday, July 18, 2009 6:06:34 AM

Ya, let's hope.

virmarytorres2 Saturday, July 18, 2009 3:08:17 PM

bigsmile Yes let's hope bigsmile

virmarytorres2 Monday, July 20, 2009 10:34:49 PM

smile

Chiran Ayeshmantha JayawardhanaSherlock-holmes Tuesday, July 21, 2009 9:37:49 AM

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ERWINWulpen Friday, October 19, 2012 7:30:44 PM



Beautiful it is..up

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