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Natural Law 31

Chain of command those who ruled
People on earth they always fooled !
Was Nero a Hero, was Hitler a Patriot
In occurring genocide, fostering riot!

They attack us, control our conscious
Making everybody frightened, anxious!
Crowned and glorified by public flood
Their hands stained with man's blood!

Name me a slaughter who did not kill
Blood of genocide who did not spill!
Weaker citizens and tied up sanity
Freedom a mirage, held up humanity!

Chain of command of defected gene
One after another, come and reign!
Weird creatures and brutal soldiers
Presidents, kings or citizen holders!

Chain of command those who ruled
People on earth they always fooled!
Was Nero a Hero, was Hitler a Patriot
In occurring genocide, fostering riot!

By promotion, selection or by election
Faking kindness and vowing devotion!
Convincing citizens to sell their soul
Nothing left over but crying or howl!

None those prophets, neither Mr. God
Freed humanity, from chain and odd!
Why sweet words or Religious Book
Best of humanity commanders took.

Chain of command thousands of years
Man made laws and leadership figures!
Robbed the freedom of all individuals
Made countries and satanic rituals!

Let us turn back and facing the past
Destination civilization must we cast!
Human rights with the state of nature
End Chain of Command once forever!

By promotion selection or by election
Faking kindness and vowing devotion!
Convincing citizens to sell their soul
Nothing is left but the crying or howl!

NATURAL LAW 30Natural Law 31

Comments

virmarytorres2 Saturday, July 25, 2009 1:56:57 AM

OK chanmok< I guess you are upset with the last message you got,it certainly shows. However I most clarify one little thing is the fact that just because I choose to have faith, does not mean that I have sold my soul to anyone. I still control my thoughts, my life, no one tells me how much money I give to the church, IF ANY! That is not the way I live my life. One thing I know that if I did not have a faith, I do not think I would have ever made it thru both of my parents funerals. [By the way my dad passed away @ 58]. Yes I come from a big family, and there will be deaths. However I had my share of burying family members that should have never gone so early. Seven years ago within a period of 9 months my family buried 6 family members, including one of my cousins. I do not think that any of us would had made it without having something to lean on. Not just family and friends. Yes there are religions out there that are and continue to be of the occult, but I do not think that all religions are brain washing in order to possess our souls. I turn to my faith to find strength, not to find ideas that will lead me to a dark path. I do not, will never do because it is not in my blood to fake kindness toward anyone. That was not the way my parents raise my brothers. sisters and myself. However I guess if people are kind to someone I'm sure others will think that they are doing it with a purpose in mind. Why, because there are people who can not even be kind to their own families. If you are kind the 1st question they might ask could possibly be They most want something really bad from me? or perhaps OH I THINK THEY ARE TRYING TO GET ME TO CHANGE MY WILL, THAT IS WHY THEY ARE BEING NICE TO ME NOW! No matter how you look @ it everything revolves around MONEY. Like I say before and as you mention, all about the past. The past is gone, done, kaput, over with, we can not change or fix it. I do not live in the past. I live today, this very moment, and I hope I can see the future. So everyday I get ready for tomorrow, and I hope that no one thinks of me as being a HIPROCRIT, just because I have a little faith in humanity. I have faith in a higher POWER, and I hope that does not make me any less human, or a target for anyone who might not share in my believes. That is the beauty of being able to have and enjoy the freedom that is has been giving to us. We all have ways of how to understand any book that is presented to us. We all can read between the lines, and create our own opinions, but that does not makes us any different from the rest of the civilization. IT IS ALL ABOUT INTERPRETATION, ISN'T IT

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Saturday, July 25, 2009 3:50:18 AM

I am not upset with you.

virmarytorres2 Saturday, July 25, 2009 3:59:39 AM

Thank you, I was worried. It is good to be able to express what we think regardless of what we all believe. As always you do know how to expressed yourself. Thank you for sharing and for accepting my comment, now go and have a bitter beer cheers while I go and have a cup of joe coffee

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Saturday, July 25, 2009 4:03:41 AM

Jesus Christ! You didn't forget my bitter Beer! I love it!cheers

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Saturday, July 25, 2009 4:09:06 AM

Listen, my friend Sereen379 just lost her father and he was only 58 years old! She is mourning and my soul is with her. Nothing on this planet can return her loss! I feel very bad when hear people die for ever! Yes, death and sorrow come to everybody! It will come to me too. Death brings the eternal peace for the deceased person...cheers

virmarytorres2 Saturday, July 25, 2009 4:20:56 AM

Of course no, I have good memory [ once in a while yikes ]. Loosing a love one is never easy, never. The pain can not be describe unless one goes thru it. The best way i to let the person know that you are there for them, an of course allowing the person to grieve. Thanks chanmok, enjoy your cheers :
while I enjoy my coffee

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Saturday, July 25, 2009 5:08:31 AM

Caffeine is not good for you. You drink too much.smile cheers

virmarytorres2 Saturday, July 25, 2009 11:47:26 AM

No, I do not drink too much coffee, really I just drink enough smile

ВладиМирPhilosoffer Monday, August 24, 2009 11:21:00 AM

Hallo,Chanmok!I am not grate specialist in poetry,but i have to say your poetry is keen and actual.In this world wery few can say the truth.Moust of people coaxing each other(mass media too).So that,most of people bear the "pink glases".The truth only make individuals sober.The truth only return people back to reality. smile

Unregistered user Wednesday, August 26, 2009 11:33:17 PM

Anonymous writes: Philosoffer, you said it right. Chanmok undoubtedly writes good poems and they all are based on real pictures.

Chan Mongolchanmok1 Friday, September 4, 2009 9:41:24 PM

Thank you very much philosoffer and Anonymous.

virmarytorres2 Friday, September 4, 2009 11:19:24 PM

So how are you dealing with someone telling you that you are good at what you do no see what I mean you are the writer bigsmile

S.Kohl Monday, March 1, 2010 12:09:34 PM

The prophecy of establishment or governing class are dictator's.
Self-counscious is the right path of liberty. Is not hat?

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