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China Jon's Syncretic Journal

An American in China

Dreaming

,

At first I failed my search for sleep,
and in my bed I tightly curled,
not knowing when a sleep so deep
took me gently around the world.

I thought I heard you calling,
and found my soul, through clouds was flying!
I wondered why I was not falling,
tumbling, screaming, crashing dying?

I could hear a thunder drumming,
and see an angel singing for us.
I just knew my death was coming,
and prepared to join the chorus!

But no! The thunder was inside my heart.
This was a beautiful second chance.
This dream would not tear us apart.
We would continue our loving dance.

I flew down, the wind was howling,
carried by an angel's wing,
down through forests dark and growling,
to alight, a new born king.

:love: :heart: :love:

Sea SoundsUpon The Windy Crag

Comments

momable 22. March 2007, 05:30

Cool! Quite a poet!!!!:smile:

chinajon 27. March 2007, 10:21

Hi Elly
Thanks for commenting.
-=J=-

SqueakeyCat 20. July 2007, 06:42

very beautiful. i love it.

hitesha 20. July 2007, 11:03

... a troubled heart..

hitesha 20. July 2007, 11:11

.. a troubled heart,
a worried mind,
I carried to bed
for the umpteenth time...

I closed my eyes
On a restless sleep
Locked within them
Were dreams to keep...

Through the thunder
Through the storm
I saw a rainbow
Standing calm...

It called to me
I went there too
Standing there
Were me and you...

Paying no heed
To the world around
Two souls on a rainbow
Lost and found...

Even then
I stopped to think
Only if
This were not a dream...

chinajon 20. July 2007, 14:30

Hi Kim

I am glad you read this one, and liked it!

Hi Hitesha

Thanks for the poem.You are romantic.

I really like this line: "Two souls on a rainbow"

So special a thought. Very creative. Thanks

;-D


hitesha 20. July 2007, 16:08

..ah you stir the poet in me..

What to do?? :frown:

SqueakeyCat 20. July 2007, 18:30

love the poem hitesha

chinajon 21. July 2007, 01:11

When the poet within is stirred, the miracles will soon begin.

;-D

hitesha 21. July 2007, 07:00

Hey Kim!!

Thanks.. it was inspired by Jon's poem.. and my fingers just itched to type.. you know what I mean??


Hey Jon..

Every word that thus flows, shall be a miracle in itself..

chinajon 21. July 2007, 13:52

hi Hitesha

You are so young to be so wise.

It is a miracle that you also have the talent to express your wisdom in the common narcotic of human words. I am awed by the flush of appreciation we share.

Thanks

... cooking cooking cooking ... This place is getting hot!

hahaha

hitesha 21. July 2007, 14:39

.. fragrances.. wafting through the air.. a poetic concoction that I am afraid I might not be able to resist.. still brewing?


Thanks Jon! That was a rather nice thing to say!!

chinajon 21. July 2007, 16:54

Ok. It's done. I must say I was expecting a love poem, seeing as who was my inspirator! But what happened was very different!

I hope you like it. My World.

:wizard:

hitesha 22. July 2007, 14:46

..oh I really love it.. it was more than what I had bargained for!!

chinajon 22. July 2007, 14:56

:-)

And that, my dear is what it is all about.

Sometimes we just need someone to kick start our heart.

I will keep reading your creative efforts, and wait for the next inspiration.

:wizard:

hitesha 23. July 2007, 06:32

..awww... I dont think m next POST is reall what you would call inspiration!

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