Dreaming
Thursday, 22. March 2007, 04:31:39
and in my bed I tightly curled,
not knowing when a sleep so deep
took me gently around the world.
I thought I heard you calling,
and found my soul, through clouds was flying!
I wondered why I was not falling,
tumbling, screaming, crashing dying?
I could hear a thunder drumming,
and see an angel singing for us.
I just knew my death was coming,
and prepared to join the chorus!
But no! The thunder was inside my heart.
This was a beautiful second chance.
This dream would not tear us apart.
We would continue our loving dance.
I flew down, the wind was howling,
carried by an angel's wing,
down through forests dark and growling,
to alight, a new born king.















momable # 22. March 2007, 05:30
chinajon # 27. March 2007, 10:21
Thanks for commenting.
-=J=-
SqueakeyCat # 20. July 2007, 06:42
hitesha # 20. July 2007, 11:03
hitesha # 20. July 2007, 11:11
a worried mind,
I carried to bed
for the umpteenth time...
I closed my eyes
On a restless sleep
Locked within them
Were dreams to keep...
Through the thunder
Through the storm
I saw a rainbow
Standing calm...
It called to me
I went there too
Standing there
Were me and you...
Paying no heed
To the world around
Two souls on a rainbow
Lost and found...
Even then
I stopped to think
Only if
This were not a dream...
chinajon # 20. July 2007, 14:30
I am glad you read this one, and liked it!
Hi Hitesha
Thanks for the poem.You are romantic.
I really like this line: "Two souls on a rainbow"
So special a thought. Very creative. Thanks
;-D
hitesha # 20. July 2007, 16:08
What to do??
SqueakeyCat # 20. July 2007, 18:30
chinajon # 21. July 2007, 01:11
;-D
hitesha # 21. July 2007, 07:00
Thanks.. it was inspired by Jon's poem.. and my fingers just itched to type.. you know what I mean??
Hey Jon..
Every word that thus flows, shall be a miracle in itself..
chinajon # 21. July 2007, 13:52
You are so young to be so wise.
It is a miracle that you also have the talent to express your wisdom in the common narcotic of human words. I am awed by the flush of appreciation we share.
Thanks
... cooking cooking cooking ... This place is getting hot!
hahaha
hitesha # 21. July 2007, 14:39
Thanks Jon! That was a rather nice thing to say!!
chinajon # 21. July 2007, 16:54
I hope you like it. My World.
hitesha # 22. July 2007, 14:46
chinajon # 22. July 2007, 14:56
And that, my dear is what it is all about.
Sometimes we just need someone to kick start our heart.
I will keep reading your creative efforts, and wait for the next inspiration.
hitesha # 23. July 2007, 06:32