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China Jon's Syncretic Journal

An American in China

Drizzle

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Rain clouds

Whispy and grey,

Weeping softly,

like lonely lovers.

If only I could touch their beauty.

The WaySilver Ribbons

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I can smell the clouds.

By Cynthia23, # 13. April 2008, 04:19:34

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Hi Cynthia!

I hope you like the wet gray days. Sometimes they are so lovely. Too many is dreary though!

-=J=-

By chinajon, # 13. April 2008, 06:08:39

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Yes, "too many are dreary." Yet, they are the days that the flowers and trees grow leaps and bounds. You explain it well as to how this can be used as a metaphor to us humans in another entry that you composed regarding sadness allowing us to appreciate happiness. You are a gifted writer. Thank you for responding.

By Cynthia23, # 13. April 2008, 06:18:31

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