China Jon's Syncretic Journal

An American in China

Drizzle

Thursday, April 3, 2008 9:39:24 AM

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Rain clouds

Whispy and grey,

Weeping softly,

like lonely lovers.

If only I could touch their beauty.

The WaySilver Ribbons

Comments

CynthiaCynthia23 Sunday, April 13, 2008 4:19:34 AM

I can smell the clouds.

Jonchinajon Sunday, April 13, 2008 6:08:39 AM

Hi Cynthia!

I hope you like the wet gray days. Sometimes they are so lovely. Too many is dreary though!

-=J=-

CynthiaCynthia23 Sunday, April 13, 2008 6:18:31 AM

Yes, "too many are dreary." Yet, they are the days that the flowers and trees grow leaps and bounds. You explain it well as to how this can be used as a metaphor to us humans in another entry that you composed regarding sadness allowing us to appreciate happiness. You are a gifted writer. Thank you for responding.

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