China Jon's Syncretic Journal

An American in China

A New Found Friend

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Alice Lotus wrote a Chinese poem that I could not translate. I took the broken pieces and wrote this...
If it has any thought resembling those of Alice Lotus, then another miracle has occurred!

A New Found Friend

The great-hearted gather flowers from the field,
though the red leaves dye their hands.

The poetry unfolds freely,
though the hundred angry flowers have thorns that sting.

Deliver to me the warm spring breeze,
though it is a gift beyond description.

The bright friendship keeps its fragrance,
though the river current does not move the stone.


... thank you Alice, for the inspiration.

What is love?The Cusp

Comments

Hiteshahitesha Friday, June 29, 2007 8:42:12 AM

it is really beautiful. The sentiments aptly conveyed! And a perfect try!1 I hope you keep trying as long as I get to read something beautiful!

Jonchinajon Friday, June 29, 2007 8:58:10 AM

Thanks hitesha

It is you who provided the motivation. I am very happy that you think it is beautiful.

;-D

Hiteshahitesha Friday, June 29, 2007 9:01:41 AM

You humble me!! smile

KimberlySqueakeyCat Friday, June 29, 2007 9:16:15 AM

really nice...like it

Jonchinajon Sunday, July 1, 2007 1:28:25 AM

Ah ha!

Modesty and appreciation: The food of the gods!

That you offer it to me is a wonderment!

Thank you both!

;-D

Eliane a/k/a Ellymomable Sunday, July 22, 2007 2:22:57 AM

smile

Jonchinajon Sunday, July 22, 2007 2:13:31 PM

Thanks Elly!

You have been busy with my blog!

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