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China Jon's Syncretic Journal

An American in China

a lonely ten thousand more

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My guest has gone with a carefree sigh,
and breezes swirl fragrant garden flowers.
Around the patio their fallen petals lie,
to be washed away by evening showers.

I have not the heart to sweep them away.
Their beauty soon enough disappears.
Like Spring like summer like an autumn day,
their luster will pass, though stained with tears.

Near my home is a shopping mall
with goods from near and far.
Window shoppers both short and tall
seek jackets and scarves and cinnabar.

Such lovely girls walk past my tower
but none of them can wear my heart
pinned to her breast like a yellow flower.
No, my love is of a deeper art.

Gone, my Queen of the Autumn Wind
who’s trumpeters play all night.
Their triumph sings to the breaking dawn
of a new day filled with glorious light.

Her Autumn fragrance lingers still
and weeping willows whisper her name.
Both soft green moss where dew drops spill
and summer breezes share her fame.

There is a statue with tears in its eyes,
Standing near an ice blue sea.
And clouds of pink wander azure skies
but know not when she’ll return to me.

Bronze tears upon a bronze face
will never be redeemed -
A leaden heart can be saved by grace
but not by the siren’s song.

Such pitiful withered orchids lie
upon the field where lovers danced
beneath a moonlit lover’s sky.
At the others the lovers glanced,
not believing that love could die.

Heaven has a feeling heart,
yet a thousand years have passed.
Lapping waves have kissed the shore
waiting for a love to last,
for a lonely ten thousand more.

It’s true that the moon’s grown old.
It sleeps in desolation.
It’s true what you hear it tales untold
but it’s no consolation.

The stone bridge took me roaming
though the wind was cutting and cold.
The sea waves chilly foaming
will wash clean my dreams grown old.

China WinterThe First Day of Spring

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bare naked the tree does stand
the leaves ground to dust at its feet
Through the swirling storms of white
trampled upon by snowy feet

There was a spot on the ground
Where neither snow nor sun dare tread
it was sheltered by the black brown branch
Of the tree which stood bare naked

There upon a time had been a flower
So ordinary and yet so rare
The tree had sheltered her through summer
And given her the shade of care

Her beauty embraced him in its grace
Her silence to the skies but screamed
As different as two bodies were they
But as one soul they seemed complete

And then one winter she was gone
And the tree had no choice but to stand
Waiting on the feet oh hope
that slitheres upon the slippery sand

JON I absolutely love coming here again and again...

By hitesha, # 25. August 2007, 05:23:19

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Wow Thanks for such a beautiful poem!

And thanks for the encouragement!

:wizard:

By chinajon, # 25. August 2007, 11:29:13

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the pleasure like I keep saying is ALL mine..:smile:

By hitesha, # 25. August 2007, 14:04:49

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and the 2 of them put together, actually read as one...

i didn't realize at first that hitesha had written a note, i just kept reading...it just sorta flowed together the two of them...

very good work you two, wonderful teaming on the poem...and both of htem are very beautifully written.

By SqueakeyCat, # 25. August 2007, 19:05:41

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thanks Kim!!

:lol:

Jon has that sort of an effect I read some piece of his and words just begin to flow...

By hitesha, # 25. August 2007, 19:08:22

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lol

By SqueakeyCat, # 25. August 2007, 19:56:41

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Hi Kim

hitesha is so talented. She really inspires me to write more, and write better! I don't want to disappoint her. I know many others read this blog, but don't respond like she does.

:wizard:

By chinajon, # 27. August 2007, 05:55:04

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Ha ha Hitesha!

You and I were writing at the same time. So interesting.

:wizard:

By chinajon, # 27. August 2007, 05:57:09

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*blush*

that was such a sweet thing to say thank you!

And it was quite impossible for you to disappoint me, or anybody else who stops here for a good read!

By hitesha, # 27. August 2007, 06:09:26

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thats for sure...i quite enjoy stopping by and reading his posts

and the little added posts that you make on here as well hitesha

By SqueakeyCat, # 27. August 2007, 07:38:41

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thanks Kim :up: :love:

By hitesha, # 27. August 2007, 07:43:12

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u r welcome

By SqueakeyCat, # 28. August 2007, 15:01:34

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Really Jon, The first blog post I decide to read when I return to Opera Community is yours, and this one specially. As they say, you'll never disappoint anyone! I feel immensely satisfied to see your poem and hitesha's are so perfectly matched.. They make the cloudy day of Shanghai colorful! Thank you both! :smile:
Regards, a boy trying to find his classroom on his first day of University, Timm.

By AzureTimm, # 3. September 2007, 01:11:39

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good luck Timm

By SqueakeyCat, # 3. September 2007, 02:58:44

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:lol:

Thanks Timm!! And Good luck!!

By hitesha, # 3. September 2007, 03:27:16

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Well shoot!

No matter what I try I can not add to my blog. I can post to comments, but not the blog itself nor any group blog. I guess it has something ot do with how the 'add post' DML works.

I do miss sharing my writing, and reading your comments. What has happened to Hitesha? Nothing from her in a long time!

Hellooooo?

By chinajon, # 31. January 2008, 13:02:57

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Whoa, a nice one!

Like the word-flow and the underlying idea.

By ricewood, # 4. February 2008, 08:32:56

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thanks.
I am trying to find a way to add new blog posts.
So far, no luck.
:troll:

By chinajon, # 5. February 2008, 05:05:52

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PS. If you know what happened to Hitesha, please let me know!

:sherlock:

By chinajon, # 7. February 2008, 13:22:42

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