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The beauty

With a stop at a village of Baiku Yao, I entered the village through a market. After the market, suddenly a terrible smell reached my nose and I couldn’t breathe. Looking around I found that the foul smell came from the excrements of cattle, chicken, ducks and geese, which appeared everywhere in the road. I put my sleeve to my nose.

How could I breathe the fresh air? Then I remembered my friend Jane, a pretty girl, who once said with a serious voice, “If there is a yellow butterfly, there can be a dream came true.” Because she had seen a short story about a little boy, who finished his dream after a yellow butterfly stopped at his middle finger. I shook my heard with a smile.

After 15mins walked, I stopped at a smelly darkness of straw-covered ground floor, where stood a little girl. Walked into the floor with the worn, darkness and concealed steps, I was shocked with the little girl’s great beauty. She is, perhaps six or seven years old, whose big black eyes seemed to take in the scene with curiosity, and, I though, sadness. She was wearing a brown dirty coat, a brownish, maybe white once, ankle-length trousers, and barefoot. Our eyes met, I smiled, but she didn’t return my smile.

She looked at my bread in my left hand with puzzled eyes. Curiosity gripped me; who is this girl? Why she looked at my bread with puzzled eyes?

The host came in, pretended she didn’t exit.

Why did the host pretend she didn’t exit? I asked him.

“She’s my daughter,” he informed me. “She, just a girl, can’t do anything.”

“Does she go to school?” I asked, perhaps unwisely. I had seen a small school, which filled with red dusts, not far away from his house.

After a moment’s silence, the host shrugged his shoulders and answered:

“It’s none of your business!”

The little beautiful girl was still standing there, with an unchanged puzzled and sad expression in her eyes.

I walked towards the little girl, gave my bread into her hand, and then came out this darkness of straw-covered ground floor. I could felt her cold in the little hard hand.

A yellow rushed into my eyes. On a flower, a tiny yellow butterfly, was fluttering with her lacerated pinions, looking like she never knew what was about to happen. My tears burst out.

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Comments

Cloudy Cai 5. December 2006, 15:33

I haven't finished this competition. It's time to closed the light. Maybe I'll finish it next time...

NVPN 6. December 2006, 07:40

Hi, I am Nam. I have read your question in Vietnamese forum (I answered) and I decide visit your blog. I know you are fond of traveling to discover, aren't you?
Glad to make friends with you! :smile:

Yvonne Larmour 7. December 2006, 07:00

I can't wait for the rest of the story. Did you give her your bread?

Cloudy Cai 7. December 2006, 13:56

Finished it! Hoho~
Maybe it's not the same as your imagination. I wanted to write a short stoy first, but I don't have much time.
However, I did like this composition, and hope you so.

Yvonne Larmour 12. December 2006, 03:07

What a beautiful story. I always feel lucky when I see butterflies. On our wedding day before the ceremony Rob and I were sitting across from each other enjoying our solitude before meeting our guests. While quietly talking to each other 2 beautiful butterflies danced and frolicked in between us, before flying off into the garden. Since then we have always taken the sight of butterflies as a good omen.

Cloudy Cai 13. December 2006, 14:22

This story is a really one. But it's not happened in BaiKuyao, it happened in Zhanjiang Leizhou when I was a flashmen. I gave the bread to the little girl. The little girl had a younger brother, wearing warming and cleaning clothes. The girl had to take care of her brother. It's one of the worst day in my living memory.

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