The beauty
Tuesday, 5. December 2006, 15:32:06
With a stop at a village of Baiku Yao, I entered the village through a market. After the market, suddenly a terrible smell reached my nose and I couldn’t breathe. Looking around I found that the foul smell came from the excrements of cattle, chicken, ducks and geese, which appeared everywhere in the road. I put my sleeve to my nose.
How could I breathe the fresh air? Then I remembered my friend Jane, a pretty girl, who once said with a serious voice, “If there is a yellow butterfly, there can be a dream came true.” Because she had seen a short story about a little boy, who finished his dream after a yellow butterfly stopped at his middle finger. I shook my heard with a smile.
After 15mins walked, I stopped at a smelly darkness of straw-covered ground floor, where stood a little girl. Walked into the floor with the worn, darkness and concealed steps, I was shocked with the little girl’s great beauty. She is, perhaps six or seven years old, whose big black eyes seemed to take in the scene with curiosity, and, I though, sadness. She was wearing a brown dirty coat, a brownish, maybe white once, ankle-length trousers, and barefoot. Our eyes met, I smiled, but she didn’t return my smile.
She looked at my bread in my left hand with puzzled eyes. Curiosity gripped me; who is this girl? Why she looked at my bread with puzzled eyes?
The host came in, pretended she didn’t exit.
Why did the host pretend she didn’t exit? I asked him.
“She’s my daughter,” he informed me. “She, just a girl, can’t do anything.”
“Does she go to school?” I asked, perhaps unwisely. I had seen a small school, which filled with red dusts, not far away from his house.
After a moment’s silence, the host shrugged his shoulders and answered:
“It’s none of your business!”
The little beautiful girl was still standing there, with an unchanged puzzled and sad expression in her eyes.
I walked towards the little girl, gave my bread into her hand, and then came out this darkness of straw-covered ground floor. I could felt her cold in the little hard hand.
A yellow rushed into my eyes. On a flower, a tiny yellow butterfly, was fluttering with her lacerated pinions, looking like she never knew what was about to happen. My tears burst out.
How could I breathe the fresh air? Then I remembered my friend Jane, a pretty girl, who once said with a serious voice, “If there is a yellow butterfly, there can be a dream came true.” Because she had seen a short story about a little boy, who finished his dream after a yellow butterfly stopped at his middle finger. I shook my heard with a smile.
After 15mins walked, I stopped at a smelly darkness of straw-covered ground floor, where stood a little girl. Walked into the floor with the worn, darkness and concealed steps, I was shocked with the little girl’s great beauty. She is, perhaps six or seven years old, whose big black eyes seemed to take in the scene with curiosity, and, I though, sadness. She was wearing a brown dirty coat, a brownish, maybe white once, ankle-length trousers, and barefoot. Our eyes met, I smiled, but she didn’t return my smile.
She looked at my bread in my left hand with puzzled eyes. Curiosity gripped me; who is this girl? Why she looked at my bread with puzzled eyes?
The host came in, pretended she didn’t exit.
Why did the host pretend she didn’t exit? I asked him.
“She’s my daughter,” he informed me. “She, just a girl, can’t do anything.”
“Does she go to school?” I asked, perhaps unwisely. I had seen a small school, which filled with red dusts, not far away from his house.
After a moment’s silence, the host shrugged his shoulders and answered:
“It’s none of your business!”
The little beautiful girl was still standing there, with an unchanged puzzled and sad expression in her eyes.
I walked towards the little girl, gave my bread into her hand, and then came out this darkness of straw-covered ground floor. I could felt her cold in the little hard hand.
A yellow rushed into my eyes. On a flower, a tiny yellow butterfly, was fluttering with her lacerated pinions, looking like she never knew what was about to happen. My tears burst out.








Cloudy Cai # 5. December 2006, 15:33
NVPN # 6. December 2006, 07:40
Glad to make friends with you!
Yvonne Larmour # 7. December 2006, 07:00
Cloudy Cai # 7. December 2006, 13:56
Maybe it's not the same as your imagination. I wanted to write a short stoy first, but I don't have much time.
However, I did like this composition, and hope you so.
Yvonne Larmour # 12. December 2006, 03:07
Cloudy Cai # 13. December 2006, 14:22