Just Silence.

Sunday, September 20, 2009 11:15:57 PM



JUST SILENCE

GIRL:

if only i could hold you back to my arms again... if only there are second chances to undo what went wrong... if only i had said how much i love you... could things have been better? all i have now are memories of you i hold in my mind. pictures of the happy moments we had i bring close to my heart. if only i have the courage to see you walking away from me, i will run towards you, hug you and never let go. if only love is never complex... where ever you will be, i will stay. in my mind, in my heart and in silence i hold you tight. in silence we will never be apart. only in silence...




BOY:

i wish i knew how to say how much i care for you... how much i love you. i wish today never came that i had to go away. i wish we have each other longer... could that be much better? all i have now is a memory of a smile in your face every time i see you... i have to look back at you for the last time as i walk away, it hurts to see your lonesome face. i wish i could turn back and say hi once again. i wish love is never complicated... where ever i go... in my mind you will stay, in my heart you will linger and in silence we will always be. only in silence..





i just want to share this little thoughts... it is originally posted in Gia bunso's page as a comment to her blog. Please refer to her blog to see the topic going on and give insights to her lovely drawing where i have gotten my inspiration in writing the conversation between two individuals torn by time, distance and love.



and my second version...


JUST SILENCE V.2

GIRL:

how could he not notice me? am i not pretty enough? i am always here in the park... waiting for you. watching you pass by... staring at you... only my imagination fills this loneliness of not being with you. i am here. do you not know me? in silence i have been loving you...




BOY:

who is this nerd looking at me? every time i walk this path she is always there. a stalker? a weirdo? huh?! i must be careful. i don't wanna know you. she must not know anything about me. i must look behind maybe she is following me. in silence i must hide myself away from her...




DONT'T FORGET TO CHECK ON GIA'S PAGE:


http://my.opera.com/theredtearsinheaven/blog/2009/09/20/just-silence?startidx=0#comments

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Comments

jonathan mathew oliveraj2craze Friday, September 25, 2009 11:02:12 AM

I feel your pain! Love is pain life is pain everything around me is pain only ìf there was a queer thay tell me pain killers is the way but only brings more pain so wat do you do ? Use that pain in your skills use it every were you go don't ask why but seems to clear tha troubles but then every others pain comes my way so the truth is pain is here to stay make the most out of it /?!.J2craze

Daneru Yuu Jindaneru Friday, September 25, 2009 7:26:10 PM

i've been living in pain... I oblige myself to take the pain... Though it hurts. i am willing to suffer... but in times, i only could wish that the world stops revolving and for sometime ease my burdens.

as you have said, i shall use my pain and make the most of it... thanks for making me realize.

Gia Nguyen AdamantSeed Tuesday, September 29, 2009 3:55:38 PM

Let that pain buried in the past and start a new day !! I believe you would find happiness again, you know you deserve it, yuka ! to live is to hope just move on !

Gia Nguyen AdamantSeed Tuesday, September 29, 2009 4:02:47 PM

oh this is so sad ...i feel like i want to cry

Anonymous Friday, October 9, 2009 2:22:17 AM

teentoinks writes: @daneru: If I could love a man in silence, then i guess hope is in me to love unconditionally!

Daneru Yuu Jindaneru Saturday, October 10, 2009 12:11:52 AM

@Gia, bunso... i have let enough tears occupy my eyes but they won't fall down. bottled emotions... *sigh* but i am starting to feel better, i just need to refresh myself. hoping for the best. happy

@teentoinks - unconditional love asks nothing in return and yet there is a space between the two of you and most of the time loving in silence, without conditions... gives a mixed feeling of desperation and hope. desperately loving and hoping that expectations won't barge in. love is mysterious enough to explore. smile waaaaaaa... may sense pa ba yun? hehe^^ =)

Gia Nguyen AdamantSeed Sunday, October 11, 2009 3:47:27 PM

found some hot chili or pepper and spread them into your eyes, i am sure this time you would find easier to cry i am sure about that lol

hahahaha just kidding Danilo yuka, i am glad that you find it better happy i hope from now on things would get easier for you ..

Daneru Yuu Jindaneru Wednesday, October 14, 2009 11:48:44 PM

hahaha^^ oh, Gia bunso... yeah I am doin fine now. i do hope so, i am under medication now that's why i can't go online that much and some other things to attend. smile

(by the way, i needed that hot chili pepper... lol)

Daneru Yuu Jindaneru Wednesday, January 6, 2010 2:15:17 AM

Hi Heather! That's okay with me... smile
So glad you like it... anyway, i'll drop by in MySpace.

i think it's the best time get back online... haven't log in there in about a year. sad

Gia Nguyen AdamantSeed Sunday, January 17, 2010 11:38:29 AM

Originally posted by shemeryh:

i gave you credit



he took inspiration from me so dont forget to pay me too wink

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