A Wife of Mine
Saturday, 14. April 2007, 21:16:51
Her love is a river
Torrents of emotion
If I should drown
In her arms I’d be found
Now who is this that comes near?
With subtle speech they seek to sever.
Respect for us? I beg to differ.
Love walks amidst Peril.
They do want to break our bands of gold
With platinum gifts and pretty words.
Another promise not to do us
What they have done, to others before.
Illogical, unlikely, I will not believe
Remember what I have, I must
I've vowed, now shall I deceive?
My mind differentiates love and lust.
There is a vessel, a wife of mine,
Where I build my castle with bricks of trust.
There are suitors, many such
More will come, yet never enough.
Her love is a river, I’ve said before
Into your streams my treasures store
Satiated, complete, with what you have given
You are my wife, you are my harem.
by Randall
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By demiphonic, # 14. April 2007, 22:31:27
By wickedlizard, # 14. April 2007, 23:28:03
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By loved, # 15. April 2007, 05:48:21
I am not married darling
& yeah... the picture does seem to suit the poem
I searched many, many pages of photos & then chose that one
By demiphonic, # 15. April 2007, 05:52:57
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By angel302006, # 16. April 2007, 00:33:05
By demiphonic, # 16. April 2007, 03:38:45
By wickedlizard, # 16. April 2007, 21:53:32
----> I think so
well done! I enjoy it!
By thuyduongmm19, # 17. April 2007, 07:50:13
"Her love is a river
Torrents of emotion
If I should drown
In her arms I’d be found"
I guess I did
Thanks
By demiphonic, # 17. April 2007, 08:21:08
your poem makes me really curious about that girl
By thuyduongmm19, # 17. April 2007, 10:23:45
By demiphonic, # 17. April 2007, 15:48:32
By thuyduongmm19, # 17. April 2007, 17:12:45
By demiphonic, # 17. April 2007, 17:59:01
If you were here right now, I'd hit you!
By thuyduongmm19, # 17. April 2007, 18:33:54
By demiphonic, # 17. April 2007, 18:41:13
take a look! someday I will hit you (it seems I'm more violent day by day >_< )
By thuyduongmm19, # 17. April 2007, 18:44:53
By demiphonic, # 17. April 2007, 20:09:07
By thuyduongmm19, # 18. April 2007, 13:16:17
....but why am I him?? I ain't bright at all!
he is cool though
By demiphonic, # 19. April 2007, 00:34:01
yes, Nara and Neji are my beloved lovers
(Neji and TenTen are quite complex, but I really expect Nara and Temari
By thuyduongmm19, # 19. April 2007, 09:57:00
By demiphonic, # 19. April 2007, 16:38:32
By Amy_E, # 20. April 2007, 02:36:59
By demiphonic, # 20. April 2007, 04:37:38
let's see, Nara always wonders why his father got married with a very terrible woman (his mother). in his own, girls are also complicated and...disgusting. and Temari's personalities are similar to his mother: violent (hehehe...), impatient but very dicisive. (did you read the chapter when Temari rescued Nara? ^_^ I think it was so clear to see...)
By thuyduongmm19, # 20. April 2007, 09:28:40
I know nothing ^_^
By loved, # 20. April 2007, 09:36:12
By thuyduongmm19, # 20. April 2007, 09:48:32
By loved, # 20. April 2007, 09:55:25
I know more about him just because I asked while you didn't. why don't you try to know more about him? I think you can be closer to him
By thuyduongmm19, # 20. April 2007, 10:08:45
And "j'aime loven" meant " i love loven"
By loved, # 20. April 2007, 10:12:49
French? >_< I don't know French, but I know a little Korean
By thuyduongmm19, # 20. April 2007, 16:22:39
yeah I saw the similarities between Temari X Shikamaru & Shikamaru’s father & Mom
By demiphonic, # 20. April 2007, 19:00:49
yes! I like that sentence "they are meant to be together"
By thuyduongmm19, # 21. April 2007, 06:19:03
By the way did you see the latest episode! (10)
By demiphonic, # 21. April 2007, 18:10:28
But that's good when I heard about Gai's team. (I have to confess that I don't really like TenTen because she's with Neji and my beloved Hinata has to be lonely
By thuyduongmm19, # 22. April 2007, 06:46:38
funny! ...TenTen getting in your way??
I have never read the manga... but I think I'll like the episodes better.
By demiphonic, # 22. April 2007, 15:04:12
yes, Naruto anime is great, really great!!! but it has more extra and I don't like them
By thuyduongmm19, # 22. April 2007, 16:09:59
when you say "more extra" - you mean the filler episodes? cause everyone knows that's not the main plot.
By demiphonic, # 23. April 2007, 03:33:28
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