I Have Not
Sunday, 29. April 2007, 05:44:44
I have not wife or 'precious gifts'
I wonder when and if I will
I am the book being judged
No one opens, no one comes.
Take your leave, run, run.
Before you hope in false thoughts.
I place the ball in your court
Practical thinking kills romance.
Few do boast those piercing eyes
No, just one… every once in a while.
Your face changes every few months
Inner beauty varies, true
Decisive action taken, none
With my burdens I won’t trouble you.
My darling “seek and you will find”
Someone else worth your time…
…who will take care of you until winter
Yet not with summer love like mine.
By Randall
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By funz81, # 1. May 2007, 04:05:48
my true feelings?? urrrrrrr...
*runs away* >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
By demiphonic, # 1. May 2007, 04:18:23
love?? nah... it only breaks your heart sometimes, and your bones if you're lucky
By funz81, # 1. May 2007, 04:23:12
But actually, love made people go blind. However it is, it's alright to fall in love. And to lose it. 'Cos you get to learn from the mistakes you made
PS: I do ACTUALLY read your blog ok
By eigenliebe, # 1. May 2007, 18:26:51
now go read my other poems Miss! ..that's an order!
By demiphonic, # 1. May 2007, 18:35:24
That's for you....because your blog is HOT. you did a great
job!
Nice poem work it mannnn!
By angel292005, # 1. May 2007, 18:44:12
By demiphonic, # 1. May 2007, 19:48:20
By angel292005, # 1. May 2007, 22:06:13
hey, what's with that look? i'm not planning to do that
By funz81, # 2. May 2007, 00:53:54
By demiphonic, # 2. May 2007, 03:03:50
By funz81, # 2. May 2007, 06:13:57
By demiphonic, # 2. May 2007, 06:42:58
oh look Randy is a frog now
By funz81, # 2. May 2007, 07:21:46
*hugz*
they're nice!
By sugarwinx, # 2. May 2007, 09:32:51
Thanks.. I'M glad you like em'
By demiphonic, # 2. May 2007, 14:37:09
*deep breath* uh, clashes with the colors on here. I am just stating my opinion....
By angel292005, # 2. May 2007, 14:43:47
By demiphonic, # 2. May 2007, 15:00:00
#993333 to a variation of #9c7742
or visa versa....?
By angel292005, # 2. May 2007, 15:37:16
By angel292005, # 2. May 2007, 15:49:15
Oh you want some clients? New or existing?
By demiphonic, # 2. May 2007, 16:20:07
Well...Ok, I will put it out there and I am sure some will come
to me if they need help.
By angel292005, # 2. May 2007, 20:47:54
you changed your poem's mind (sorry, I dn't know how to explain it >.<, I mean "the feeling that you showed in your poem) suddenly and it made me a bit confused.
a little lonely, and then, suddenly remember/need someone?
I don't really think that you just show your own feeling (in fact, I see most of your poems have both feelings: yours and someone's). it seems like you a little compared yourself to somebody else.
arghhh!!!!!! forget me! I'm starting to go too faarrrrr and wrongly....
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anyway, nice poem, Randy
"My darling “seek and you will find”
Someone else worth your time…
…who will take care of you until winter
Yet not with summer love like mine."
it's painful, sad, lonely but really sweet ^.^
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I like this theme, Randy
nice work, Shield Wolf
By thuyduongmm19, # 5. May 2007, 09:07:51
hey glad you like the poem
Children are like "precious gifts" from God.
people sometime say: "Don't judge a book by it's cover" meaning don't judge someone by external appearance alone. My way of putting that is:
"I am the book being judged
No one opens, no one comes."
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"Take your leave, run, run.
Before you hope in false thoughts.":
means don't get too involved in me, before you fall in love & realize we cannot go further in the relationship, due to external circumstances that may prevent it.
Those women that have "piercing eyes" are those who see the 'real me'. You don't see women like that very often.
My darling “seek and you will find”
Someone else worth your time…
…who will take care of you until winter
Yet not with summer love like mine.
the above means, find someone else to take care of you Now until the 'winter of your life' (old age)
Yet what they find will not bear the intense "summer" 'heat' of my love.
By demiphonic, # 5. May 2007, 15:40:39
though I really understand right the second (that's why I typed "a little lonely")
"I am the book being judged
No one opens, no one comes."
____________________________________________________
"Take your leave, run, run.
Before you hope in false thoughts.":
(at least ....
anyway, I still believe in my own feeling. in fact, because I can't feel any diffrent way
By thuyduongmm19, # 5. May 2007, 18:12:13
By demiphonic, # 5. May 2007, 19:00:26
By thuyduongmm19, # 5. May 2007, 20:03:42
By angel292005, # 5. May 2007, 22:25:46
maybe I WAS born to say pleasant things?
By demiphonic, # 5. May 2007, 23:56:41
By angel292005, # 6. May 2007, 00:42:31
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By thuyduongmm19, # 6. May 2007, 13:17:42
By angel292005, # 6. May 2007, 15:33:39
By thuyduongmm19, # 6. May 2007, 16:00:21
By angel292005, # 6. May 2007, 16:01:21
By thuyduongmm19, # 6. May 2007, 16:16:18
By angel292005, # 6. May 2007, 16:22:32
By angel292005, # 6. May 2007, 16:23:52
By demiphonic, # 6. May 2007, 16:29:45
the Internet here is crazy!!!
see you later, Sarah
By thuyduongmm19, # 6. May 2007, 16:37:52
By thuyduongmm19, # 6. May 2007, 16:51:21
See you later Willow.
Randy..I adopt a lot of people, sorry...
By angel292005, # 6. May 2007, 16:54:25
resulting in this
*edit=it didn't show the code, so click edit on my post here and you will see it.
By angel292005, # 6. May 2007, 16:55:35
that's why I hate Singapore
By thuyduongmm19, # 6. May 2007, 16:59:58
Can't I just use this part first
confused.
edit: I tried it above.. guess it didn't work
what if the image is from google or from my files? how do I embed it here
By demiphonic, # 6. May 2007, 17:07:47
By angel292005, # 6. May 2007, 17:45:04
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By demiphonic, # 6. May 2007, 19:50:27
Thanks Sarah
By demiphonic, # 6. May 2007, 19:52:58
By angel292005, # 6. May 2007, 20:01:47
By demiphonic, # 6. May 2007, 20:09:37