Love Stronger than Death
Tuesday, 3. July 2007, 03:59:22
Do you cry for me, loving Mom?
Do you miss the child that never was?
Yet I was there, before my demise.
And I’ve learned the songs you sang.
When I kicked from inside the womb
“I love you”, is what I meant.
Those days and months, the bond we shared
Lie in memories you’ve kept.
Sadly not all enemies we perceive
No… no fault placed in your hands
How I long for release from sleep
Find a place in my mother’s arms.
Do not believe it is the end
Hope in Him with keys to Death
Love, stronger than mortality
Live for the chance we’ll meet again.
by Randall
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By demiphonic, # 3. July 2007, 04:02:04
Well written.
By Dacotah, # 3. July 2007, 04:11:10
By mommyluvsliz, # 3. July 2007, 05:09:31
This is such a moving poem... You
writewrote beautifully...May u R.I.P., Randy...
By sugarwinx, # 3. July 2007, 06:44:09
Thank you everyone.. glad you all like the Poem
By demiphonic, # 3. July 2007, 14:20:53
By toecat, # 3. July 2007, 14:26:55
By demiphonic, # 3. July 2007, 14:43:09
I think that dropping the last stanza would make a considerable improvement. But that's only imho, of course. Or, perhaps, a minor change to open the window to the prospect of a later born sibling, who is in part the child that never was; an undeniable hope for reincarnation, instead of floating 'false' ones ("false" for the non-Abrahamist, that is).
By Niddhogg, # 3. July 2007, 17:56:42
Yeah I do agree that the last stanza is not as moving as the rest.. but it gives hope so I believe it's necessary
As for the reincarnation bit.. hmmm well I don't believe in that… but I do believe in the God of Abraham
but I appreciate your views
By demiphonic, # 3. July 2007, 18:19:53
arewere alive, u never showed much appreciation to her...?May u R.I.P. my darling, iHubby...
(Hmmmm... Where are the insurance papers...?
By sugarwinx, # 3. July 2007, 19:04:40
*yeah right*
By demiphonic, # 3. July 2007, 19:07:20
Oh, come here and gimme a snuggle wuggle!!!
By sugarwinx, # 4. July 2007, 05:58:42
By demiphonic, # 4. July 2007, 06:47:02
By Dacotah, # 4. July 2007, 06:50:27
By demiphonic, # 4. July 2007, 07:04:12
By Dacotah, # 4. July 2007, 07:11:55
better?
By demiphonic, # 4. July 2007, 07:14:52
Oh my, 240
By Dacotah, # 4. July 2007, 07:20:37
I have no comment about your style or tone (in fact, my English isn't good enough to see them
By thuyduongmm19, # 4. July 2007, 08:00:40
By demiphonic, # 4. July 2007, 15:57:37
By sugarwinx, # 4. July 2007, 16:20:33
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By demiphonic, # 5. July 2007, 00:50:37
By Dacotah, # 5. July 2007, 01:16:56
By angel292005, # 5. July 2007, 03:16:08
By demiphonic, # 5. July 2007, 03:38:25
It's in Randy's OTHER blog...
That's a lame excuse for snuggling and wuggling with my now-extremely-promiscuous-butt-groping-and-butt-grabing iHubby...
By sugarwinx, # 5. July 2007, 03:44:30
By Dacotah, # 5. July 2007, 03:56:52
I'm under a lot of pressure... These stress from this iMarriage can't be good for my mental health...
By sugarwinx, # 5. July 2007, 05:50:10
By demiphonic, # 5. July 2007, 17:12:15
By Dacotah, # 5. July 2007, 17:21:08
By angel292005, # 5. July 2007, 17:25:05
By Dacotah, # 5. July 2007, 17:26:02
By angel292005, # 5. July 2007, 17:28:55
Mood=
Good!!
By Dacotah, # 5. July 2007, 17:30:23
I am in a REALLY good mood.
Everybody hates me
By angel292005, # 5. July 2007, 17:37:59
By angel292005, # 5. July 2007, 17:38:44
By Dacotah, # 5. July 2007, 17:39:37
By Dacotah, # 5. July 2007, 17:40:22
By angel292005, # 5. July 2007, 17:41:06
Isn't this world a happy place... Except I'm not 100% certain that Dacotah being a penguin is such a good thing... (Must be hard for her flippers to tap the keyboard keys when she's online on Opera...
By sugarwinx, # 6. July 2007, 06:18:14
By demiphonic, # 6. July 2007, 06:34:46
Shaddap and let Dacotah stand her own fight for her own penguin fipping flippers!
By sugarwinx, # 6. July 2007, 07:21:30
By angel292005, # 6. July 2007, 11:24:27
By Dacotah, # 6. July 2007, 12:14:00
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By Dacotah, # 6. July 2007, 14:50:17