Listen
Thursday, 20. December 2007, 06:15:45
Ah, the time does not permit to tell how I feel
If you could see what seems so transparent to me
So obvious like trembling knees
So pure like white sheets
Think I’ll hold back from saying and song
Look the other way around
Yet my heart burns away tonight, alone
When I am gone, do you think of me?
Wherever you are I pray for thee
Smile at things you once said
Get the naughty thoughts out my head!
Make self control my dear friend
And if we fall out I’m a dead man
Cause the way you look
Just the way you are
Defines what a woman should be
Something like Eve without the greed
A “good wife”, yes the dream come to life
New like colour to once blind eyes
Tension set emeralds with princess cuts shine
A heart channel set toward you
Rightfully jealous for what is mine
Just say those words & I’ll fight!
Just say those words, thus make me believe
You will seek no other forever
Forgive me darling, my ways are crude
It’s not my fault, I speak truth
In me find no room for deceit
No clever lies to win your hand
Hope I’m enough and then some
True lovers were friends – they became one
Still I seem to build castles in sand
At the end of an aisle that stretches for miles
No time to be graceful; Run!
See me for who I am
Know that you’re the reason I’ve waited this long.
by Randall
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By demiphonic, # 20. December 2007, 06:26:05
i happen to like it
and very heartfelt as well
By SqueakeyCat, # 20. December 2007, 07:15:11
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By demiphonic, # 21. December 2007, 03:36:30
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By demiphonic, # 21. December 2007, 15:29:35
no deceit...no clever lie... a good image huh?
By meimy1612, # 23. December 2007, 03:12:21
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By demiphonic, # 27. December 2007, 05:52:27
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By sugarwinx, # 30. December 2007, 05:18:15
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By brokenheartvn, # 30. December 2007, 14:50:20
By demiphonic, # 30. December 2007, 15:22:14
By brokenheartvn, # 30. December 2007, 16:27:44
Funny... the more eloquent words you use the less sincere you appear to be. …as though you crafted it with more thought as to how it SOUNDS rather that how you FEEL.
I guess it’s note worthy that most of it I wrote very quickly. However the last portion gave some trouble like I said before…. I knew exactly what I want to say but it just never rhymed with the finished portion. So I had to rearrange my words & still keep my line of thought.
It's unlikely that she does... or ever will feel the way I do about her .. but I try not to think of that & just say what needs to be said.. what ever happens, happens.... time will tell.
I’ll tell you one thing though…. She is worth spending my time on.
By demiphonic, # 30. December 2007, 17:51:03
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By OJulien, # 12. January 2008, 08:41:10
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By sugarwinx, # 12. January 2008, 13:00:10
By demiphonic, # 12. January 2008, 14:01:52
And this should be the highlight of your January 2008!!
By sugarwinx, # 12. January 2008, 15:15:28
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By sugarwinx, # 13. January 2008, 04:37:27
By demiphonic, # 13. January 2008, 15:56:44
By OJulien, # 13. January 2008, 19:13:12
I mean, his highlights for January is us becoming friends!!
By sugarwinx, # 13. January 2008, 23:29:48
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By OJulien, # 14. January 2008, 22:31:02
Bitchy!!
By sugarwinx, # 17. January 2008, 19:34:48
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By demiphonic, # 8. March 2008, 15:38:43
btw you're a great poet!!
By Bellaza, # 18. March 2008, 20:48:33
1. Duh.
2. I Know
By demiphonic, # 18. March 2008, 21:01:52
she never lets you go! but you like it hehe I know you do ;P
By Bellaza, # 18. March 2008, 21:21:13
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