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Pat Maginess: Private-Eye

Hard Shelled Detective Fiction by Edward Piercy

I Drove All Night




Eat your heart out Celine Dion!


(And yes, yes, that's all right...
my dearest...my love...)



I remember when I was younger that kind
of passion. Where I couldn't wait one single
minute longer to be with her, hold her, kisses
so deep it was like falling down an elevator
shaft. Lying with her, stroking her hair.
Hours that seemed to stop time altogether.

What has happened to that? It has been ages
since I have felt that. Ages since there has
been someone like that inside my soul. Perhaps,
I thought, such passions are a matter of youth.
But I don't think that is true.

This, I think, is simply an emptying out.
The End of Days. Not getting to someone,
but a time of perpetual good-byes. And
there is nothing sad in that really.

But I must admit, I wouldn't mind experiencing
that kind of passion just once more. Just to
remember what it felt like. Just to drive all
night, the headlights extending out on the road,
the tiredness like an ache, but the love driving
me on, for just that one

kiss.



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Excellent :up:

By lokutus_prime, # 7. July 2008, 11:03:51

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*sigh*

I'm with you here. I remember when The One And Only and I had been separated as long as three consecutive days. When we were together again - at last - we both cried of joy and of pain at the same time. Joy because we were together now, and pain because we somehow knew this wouldn't last.

*sigh*

By ricewood, # 7. July 2008, 15:58:56

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great write edward! yes, allan you are so right!

sometimes it isn't the kiss that is as important to me as the smile, the face that lights up, the tears of joy that flow because another is happy to see me . . . . i miss those days too! very much!!!!!!

diamond rio has a song that portrays my deep feelings on this subject -- with a little more time and a few more brain cells, i might be able to find it for you!

By 1bluebox, # 7. July 2008, 22:21:09

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Amen :up:

By lokutus_prime, # 7. July 2008, 23:00:17

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my grammar is so poor, i should've edited that comment!

thanks prime! thanks.

By 1bluebox, # 7. July 2008, 23:11:32

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awwww , 1bluebox you did it again! inspiring the rest of us,

a kiss,
it doesn't mater if it is a quick kiss,
a long kiss,
a kiss on the eyes,
a kiss on the lips.

a kiss it is an art,
every body that kisses is an artist and
I am dying to be the canvas.

By ellinidata, # 7. July 2008, 23:45:50

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thanks for sharing Ed,
a :heart: felt post.

By ellinidata, # 7. July 2008, 23:46:18

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good write el (may i call you el?)!!!!!!!

i long to be the canvas in his eyes! deborah.

By 1bluebox, # 8. July 2008, 00:05:29

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my real name is Angeliki, for my American friends Angela,
I answer to el too :smile:

Good Luck with the artist of your heart...
:heart:

By ellinidata, # 8. July 2008, 00:51:08

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Everyone, thanks for your comments. And if you get the link Deborah, it would be great if you post it here. :up:

By edwardpiercy, # 8. July 2008, 01:27:31

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Angeliki, how did you like Wimbleton? I was listening to them talk about it on the news, and they say that the men's final might have been one of the greatest in history.

By edwardpiercy, # 8. July 2008, 01:56:36

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it was Ed,
at the point that even the spectators (like McEnroe..had tears in their eyes) Amazing and despite of the interruptions because of rain and the longest in the history of men's tennis, it was the most amazing game that I feel privileged to be able to enjoy!!
thanks for asking.
A life long memory.
I did tape it but I am sure it will be something to talk about for the years to come ..
:smile:

By ellinidata, # 8. July 2008, 02:01:28

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Ed, I watched the entire match over here on BBC TV. :smile:
It was the greatest tennis game in history.
These are not just my words, this is what all the
commentators were saying as the battle played out.
Angeliki's right and she speaks for me when she says
it was the most amazing game that I feel privileged to be able to enjoy!!

I watched Bjorn Borg get beaten by McEnroe (I was a toddler at the time :whistle: ) and in context that has always been described as "the greatest game" but now this one between Nadal and Federer has trumped that! These two guys are so magnificent but beacuse of my deep personal affection for Spain I was up there rooting for Nadal and shouting "Vamos Rafa!", yet at the same time I was admiring Federer for all of his magic and skill and half-hoping he would pull it off and break Borg's record. This was truly a sporting match that upheld all the aspirations and principles of the ancient Greece games' tradition :happy:

What a day! :yes:

Rafa Loku :D

By lokutus_prime, # 8. July 2008, 07:58:25

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You men that Bjorn actually lost a match? LOL.

I am happy that you both got to see something like that. :up:



By edwardpiercy, # 8. July 2008, 12:45:27

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thanks Ed,
I hope more to come and maybe one day we can watch one together
having that Jack Daniels :smile:



****


Rafa Loku??
:D

¿Tiene Loku los fusiles que Rafa tiene también?? ¡Fui hipnotizado y estuve muy agradecido experimentar tal asombrar el igual!

By ellinidata, # 8. July 2008, 15:24:46

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Rafa Loku? - Claro!

Estoy tan bien como Rafa pero los medios no han descubierto mis habilidades de tenis aún. Ellos también no han descubierto las habilidades de poesía de Rafa aún.Yo y Rafa hablaremos de esto tan pronto come el me llame :D

By lokutus_prime, # 8. July 2008, 16:00:49

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:smile:
Hablaba de los músculos, por supuesto las capacidades poéticas pueden ser tan fuertes como el físico, cualquier manera yo nunca subestimo el poder
de un músculos mentales

By ellinidata, # 8. July 2008, 16:04:15

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Here's a beautiful pic from the british Daily Telegraph news paper:


By lokutus_prime, # 8. July 2008, 16:06:17

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P.S.
for the non Spanish speaking friends a very general translation....

I asked Loku if his "guns" are as strong as Rafas,
his response was:
I am good as Rafa in tennis but the world did not discovered it yet, as they did not discover Rafa's ability to poetry...


I am always amazed by the strength of a mental muscles...

By ellinidata, # 8. July 2008, 16:06:31

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lovely picture , thanks for sharing... have a great afternoon...:smile:

By ellinidata, # 8. July 2008, 16:07:21

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:happy:

By lokutus_prime, # 8. July 2008, 16:21:39

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So Federer and Nadal are in love then. That's wonderful. I hope they will be very happy together! They can get married in California now. :smile:



By edwardpiercy, # 8. July 2008, 17:36:12

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:lol:

your mind can become a weapon ! :lol:

By ellinidata, # 8. July 2008, 17:39:03

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His mind IS a weapon :D

By lokutus_prime, # 8. July 2008, 17:42:09

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A blunderbuss.

:lol:

By edwardpiercy, # 8. July 2008, 17:51:02

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Scattering everyone of us :lol:

By lokutus_prime, # 8. July 2008, 19:00:27

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Beautiful and very poignant, Ed. It gave me a little stab in the heart.

By PainterWoman, # 8. July 2008, 20:12:13

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hahaha now you got me!
I went to wikipedia to see what you are talking about and they give me measurements ..:lol: 41cm and 16 inches!
I am not visiting this post for the rest of the day or I will have night mares tonight!!!


"..............lock dragon is around eleven inches (28 cm), compared to a sixteen inch (41 cm) length for a blunderbuss.[2] "

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blunderbuss

By ellinidata, # 8. July 2008, 20:30:39

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