Tell about a person that you admire!

Monday, 14. April 2008, 15:47:00

The person that i admire is one of the most famous football players in the world-David Beckham. I admire him because of his talent. He is the genius in king-sport with his freekick-shot and his pass on the right wing. He goals many times from the freekick. He has obtained a lot of champion on his own life , especially the 3-hit ( FA, C1, PremierShip) in 1998-1999 season. Not only is Beck talent but also he is very smart. He uses his talent and his good-looking to get a lot of money from advertising, big/worth contracts...... Beck has mostly been known from around the world by especially Asian women because of his manly aspect. Now he goes through at the end of his job in LA Galaxy- US soccer club. Although, he isn't now playing in his best, but he has been the most favorite man in the world still. He is representative for United Nation to help people against poverty, AIDS, calamity... Football king - Pele voted for Beck as one of the Top 100 immortal football players in 20th.

What would you do if you had 100 millions?Movie

Comments

Beck! I love Beck!

remember I was terribly miserable when getting the news that he married Vic !

hic hic...now, I get fun thinking about it!

really kid's phenomenon

.Actually I have lost interest in football since Beck left M.U...and now? I just don't care what he is doing!

.That is how things go when the girl grew up

since this is blog for english, I wanna correct some mistakes in this writing, SERIOUS ones

1. because + CLAUSE while because of + Phrase
----> here, u should rite: "I admire him because he is talented" or "because of his talent"

2. get money from ADVERTISING, NOT advertisements ---> advertisement is just a piece of paper that adds appealing things in2 it saying about some product or service, ...while advertising in fact concerns about an industry...well u can learn from dictionary

that s all I want to say for this entry !

By on2424h, # 15. April 2008, 11:11:47

nobita writes:

Basical mistakes. Bro kuunon, I think you should ask somebody to check your entry before you post it.

The person that I admire is Andrea Pirlo, so a football player, I'm sure that you know him, kuunon. He's a professional free-kicker, too. Althought he's not as handsome as Becks but I think he is so good-looking, he always plays football with half-closed eyes, althought he's a defensiving half-back but he seldom has mistakes, he has an artistic way of playing, and I love him because of that!

About Beckham, I think that there's no any football player who can goal from the free-kick as Becks did. David Beckham is the most special and talented free-kicker of the world.

By anonymous user, # 15. April 2008, 13:03:21

@nobita and chi:it was the stunned mistakes. I know how to use "because and because of". However, i didn't realize this mistakes, when i wrote this passage

By englishlearning, # 15. April 2008, 16:26:21

by the way, Chi, nobit and everybody, you try to correct my writing more frequently

thanks a lot

By englishlearning, # 15. April 2008, 16:32:45

come on man, Beckham? he sucks. You should change your idol. I think the best footballer in the world now is C. Ronaldo or Kaka.

Btw, your English is better now. I can tell even though my English sucks.
Keep the good work and hopefully see u in someday.

By chimviet, # 21. April 2008, 23:49:24

kuunon writes:

just do i admire the way he has got a lot of money by using his talent

By anonymous user, # 22. April 2008, 02:04:42