My Poems and Other Life Issues by Christy

In the distance a child cries

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He comes to her room
slowly creeping in
he looks at her with
hunger in his eyes.

He thrusts himself upon her
not hearing her pleas
she struggles with him
trying to escape.

In the distance a child cries.

She tries to run and hide
from his strong ways
fighting against him
relentlessly giving up.

He leaves the room with
satisfaction in his eyes
he hungers no more.

In the distance a child cries.


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Comments

ClaireFwTags Saturday, June 30, 2007 1:33:51 AM

Wow! Im lost for words,it brings a tear to ones eye and a shiver down the spine.

Sarah angel292005 Saturday, June 30, 2007 2:58:17 AM

Quite sad but it happens. I enjoy your poetry. Here is a link to the group, I hope that more join.

http://my.opera.com/lovingourangels/blog/

Donsphuyal Saturday, June 30, 2007 9:07:19 AM

Beautifully composed

Wizardlokutus-prime Thursday, July 5, 2007 8:39:19 PM

I saw you had written a comment in my friend Dacotah's blog, regarding her beautiful prayer-poem, and so I thought I would visit your page, and here I am.

Your poem is concise and poignant and it raises vivid images through its simple yet cogent narrative. Thank you for sharing this.

I also see that there are other poems on your pages. I will backtrack and read them as soon as I can. I have placed you on my Friend list but if you do not wish this please pm me and I will reverse what I have done.

Best wishes,
Lokutus
(an occasional scribbler of poetry)

Jaxs Powelleagle4eyes Sunday, September 27, 2009 4:53:54 AM

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Christygreathoneybear Monday, September 28, 2009 8:45:07 AM

Thank you Jax for such a beautiful and relaxing picture. I am sure you understand the poem.

Jaxs Powelleagle4eyes Monday, September 28, 2009 12:08:31 PM

Yes I do understand the poem.

I have much compassion for the woman and child. cry

Jaxs Powelleagle4eyes Tuesday, October 13, 2009 3:59:10 AM

Out from the ashes beauty rises.

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