Relax
Monday, 3. September 2007, 04:05:55
as we walk along the water.
The waves lap at our feet as
we dance together through the sand.
You smile at me and grab my hand
as we start to run.
We wrestle in the soft sand letting it
flow through our fingers.
We lay down and let the sand cascade
slowly over our bodies.
You lean in to kiss me ever so softly,
holding each other so close.
We relax as the ocean waves go in and out,
watching the sunset as we become as one.

By:© CMN 2007














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Dacotah # 3. September 2007, 05:34
Christy # 3. September 2007, 05:47
Dacotah # 3. September 2007, 05:52
Please get some rest now.
Christy # 3. September 2007, 05:54
Hitesha # 3. September 2007, 08:09
the poem is wonderful.. transports to the beack with the one I love...
and the concern in the comments is touching..
hope both of you managed to get your share of rest
Li # 3. September 2007, 08:20
Dacotah # 3. September 2007, 11:31
Hitesha # 3. September 2007, 11:47
Dacotah # 3. September 2007, 11:51
It's going to take awhile for me to get better.
Hitesha # 3. September 2007, 11:54
Christy # 3. September 2007, 12:44
Dacotah # 3. September 2007, 12:46
Christy # 3. September 2007, 12:47
Hitesha # 3. September 2007, 12:47
Carol has claimed my heart waaaaaaaaaaaaaay back!!
Dacotah # 3. September 2007, 13:02
Hitesha # 3. September 2007, 13:32
Dacotah # 3. September 2007, 13:34
You Can't Kill The Metal - The Metal Will Live On # 3. September 2007, 14:18
Are you getting any better? And how about you, Carol?
I hope you're both okay. Remember to take it easy, okay?
Dacotah # 3. September 2007, 14:20
You Can't Kill The Metal - The Metal Will Live On # 3. September 2007, 14:26
Dacotah # 3. September 2007, 14:34
Christy # 3. September 2007, 15:07
Dacotah # 3. September 2007, 15:11
You Can't Kill The Metal - The Metal Will Live On # 3. September 2007, 17:16
Yeah, we will
Dennis # 3. September 2007, 18:10
*runs off to find swimsuit and sandals*
.
.*Yells over his shoulder, "Hope you're feeling better!"*
Christy # 3. September 2007, 23:34
That is about as far as I get to the ocean.
and thanks for the thumbs up on getting better
rea's community # 8. September 2007, 04:40
u really have to got this
nice poem !
and nice picture on it..
Christy # 8. September 2007, 05:08
rea's community # 8. September 2007, 05:12
to the beach...
nice to hear the sound of the waves..
i recorded it once in my digital camera...
but no chance now coz its broken ...
Christy # 8. September 2007, 05:14
rea's community # 8. September 2007, 05:19
i like the photographer! he can make many shots ha!
you are funny ..i have to laugh.
Christy # 8. September 2007, 05:22
rea's community # 8. September 2007, 05:29
yeah ! thats my move my move ! nice shoes u've got!
Christy # 8. September 2007, 05:33
rea's community # 8. September 2007, 05:35
how much ? i dont think it cost a lot coz its too small
like ant !
Christy # 8. September 2007, 05:39
We like to have fun at night. Keeps us occupied while the guys sleep. Shhhh.
rea's community # 8. September 2007, 05:41
Christy # 8. September 2007, 05:43
rea's community # 8. September 2007, 05:45
Christy # 8. September 2007, 05:45
Dennis # 8. September 2007, 05:58
Christy # 8. September 2007, 05:59
Dennis # 8. September 2007, 06:04
rea's community # 8. September 2007, 06:05
Nicolas Borgsmidt # 10. September 2007, 19:50
Christy # 10. September 2007, 19:54
Nicolas Borgsmidt # 10. September 2007, 19:57
rea's community # 11. September 2007, 09:18
Christy # 11. September 2007, 19:20
rea's community # 12. September 2007, 06:40