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Thanks

Tuesday, December 13, 2005 6:46:41 PM

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Thanks for the brilliant suggestions I received. I love hearing from you guys. I'm leaving the original (In his arms) below for others to see how it has developed. Please feel welcome to leave comments anytime. Cya, I'll be working on the poem now.

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In his arms

Monday, December 12, 2005 1:49:37 PM

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(Before drifting asleep)
I lay awake and watch him sleep,
his gentle eyes closed in peace.
His body close to mine I keep,
and there in his arms I fall asleep.

to be continued.
I'm still working on this.

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