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Fantasy...

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His steps tell of mysteries not yet told.
He walks in a way that makes the earth sway.
His legs hold the ground like pillars of gold.
When he moves, the angels start in joyful play.

He speaks of everyday mundane things,
yet my heart moves to the sound of his voice like mesmerised dancers to melodic beats.

His eyes reflect heaven's own lustrious glory,
and when he looks at me the clouds seem to give way to the break of early day.

With his arms around me,
the earth may fall apart and heaven may throw down each and every star.
And still my world would stand as firm as before,
as long as I have his arms around me.

And even if every worldly wonder should fade and every heavenly grace should cease,
His praises will remain through eternity for all to see.

By Melissa aka Honeybe :wink:

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Comments

shadowK 16. November 2006, 08:52

You Finlay finished it :smile: it's a bit different then the first draft, but great non the less :smile:
Great job:

You're a poet,
And you know it.
You pick up words,
And move them forwards,
So a rhyme slowly appears
Just like a song, in one's ear's.





Melissa 16. November 2006, 09:32

Hey, I'm glad you like it. Yes, I did change a bit from the original draft.
Thank you for your help...
You're a poet too :smile:

Regards,
Melissa

Marcus 16. November 2006, 19:28

Hi Melissa,
Another wonderful poem from one of Opera's best poets :up: How do you keep coming up with such wonderful poetry? I think you were born a poet :yes:

:smile:
Marcus

Nikolaos 16. November 2006, 20:09

Very Nice... :smile:

Melissa 17. November 2006, 11:28

Hi Marcus and Nikolaos,
I get my inspiration from the Opera Community, there's so many talented people her :wink:
Thank you for leaving your comments :smile:

:wink:
Melissa

Dillon Roberts 20. November 2006, 00:07

Hey Sweetie.

That sho was a purdy poem! Must be a great guy. I'm jealous.
Bye.

Dillon

Melissa 22. November 2006, 06:41

:lol: It's what dreams are made of, hence the title "Fantasy"... :wink:
Thanks for dropping by, it's so nice to hear from you :smile:

Melissa :smile:

dɹɐzılpǝkɔıw ɐʞɐ ɹǝɥgɐllɐg lǝbɐsı 23. November 2006, 15:54

catching up on my posts! :D


I very much like your poetry - you should turn them into song!

Nikolaos 23. November 2006, 20:19

...or you can publish them…. :smile: :smile: :smile:

Randall 25. November 2006, 16:55

awwwww.. you can tell everyone it's ME you're talking bout Melissa :D

:lol::lol: ...kidding :D

Nice Poem. My best line is "When he moves, the angels start in joyful play.".. very creative :up:

Melissa you are so beautiful, you can get pretty much any guy you want... you are one of the few who can make "Fantasy" reality. Take your time, choose wisely.

Happy hunting.

Melissa 25. November 2006, 18:17

Hi Isabel and Nikolaos,
Thank you for your comments...
I'll definitely take it into consideration :wink:

Hey Randall,
Wow, what a very sweet comment!
Oh, I think it's too much credit for me to accept, thank you very much.
Hey, now I just need my shotgun for hunting :wink:

I really appreciate all your kind words.

Regards,
Melissa :smile:

Randall 26. November 2006, 04:30

:wink:

Quest2rest 30. November 2006, 10:09

So much love. Must be some incredible guy who awakens such bliss in you. Wow.:smile:

rdmaloyjr 10. December 2006, 16:48

The man in this poem sounds like Jesus.:-)

My blog: http://thecross.wordpress.com

sahil007 12. December 2006, 07:55

hey, i joined opera comm. 2day n,i thnk found 1 of da most creative n smrt ppl ere! U rocks! Hats off 2 u! I really liked ur poetry. I wish ,if v cud b frndz! By dat way m frm india.

Nikolaos 13. December 2006, 16:34

Welcome Sahi. Yes, she is the best!

flower20 14. December 2006, 04:53

hello
i hope u be good
contact me late i hope we be good friend for each other
bye for now
my email is: uner_some_trees@yahoo.com

Eva 19. December 2006, 15:11

When a girl writes a poem to someone like that. That's when you know where love comes from. And it also states the energy Melissa likes to put in motion, thus...the emotion of passion she feels.

Raghav 11. March 2007, 18:49

Hi Melissa,

Awesome poem. Is it autobiographical i.e. does the poem stem from your feelings for somebody who leads a nomadic lifestyle?

Am curious to know what inspired you to write the story.

Randall 11. March 2007, 19:30

Its me :eyes: I inspired her - back off :ninja:


:lol: (just kiddin') :lol:

Melissa 18. March 2007, 07:03

Hey, it is strange that I often write about someone that's never around or close enough...
What can I say?
Other than...
Some things are better left as a mystery :wink:

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