Not much to say

but... I'll try....

Fantasy...

,



His steps tell of mysteries not yet told.
He walks in a way that makes the earth sway.
His legs hold the ground like pillars of gold.
When he moves, the angels start in joyful play.

He speaks of everyday mundane things,
yet my heart moves to the sound of his voice like mesmerised dancers to melodic beats.

His eyes reflect heaven's own lustrious glory,
and when he looks at me the clouds seem to give way to the break of early day.

With his arms around me,
the earth may fall apart and heaven may throw down each and every star.
And still my world would stand as firm as before,
as long as I have his arms around me.

And even if every worldly wonder should fade and every heavenly grace should cease,
His praises will remain through eternity for all to see.

By Melissa aka Honeybe wink

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Comments

shadowKshadowk Thursday, November 16, 2006 8:52:06 AM

You Finlay finished it smile it's a bit different then the first draft, but great non the less smile
Great job:

You're a poet,
And you know it.
You pick up words,
And move them forwards,
So a rhyme slowly appears
Just like a song, in one's ear's.





Melissahoneybe Thursday, November 16, 2006 9:32:14 AM

Hey, I'm glad you like it. Yes, I did change a bit from the original draft.
Thank you for your help...
You're a poet too smile

Regards,
Melissa

MarcusFXM256 Thursday, November 16, 2006 7:28:52 PM

Hi Melissa,
Another wonderful poem from one of Opera's best poets up How do you keep coming up with such wonderful poetry? I think you were born a poet yes

smile
Marcus

NikolaosNikolaosX1 Thursday, November 16, 2006 8:09:19 PM

Very Nice... smile

Melissahoneybe Friday, November 17, 2006 11:28:28 AM

Hi Marcus and Nikolaos,
I get my inspiration from the Opera Community, there's so many talented people her wink
Thank you for leaving your comments smile

wink
Melissa

Dillon RobertsDillonRoberts Monday, November 20, 2006 12:07:24 AM

Hey Sweetie.

That sho was a purdy poem! Must be a great guy. I'm jealous.
Bye.

Dillon

Melissahoneybe Wednesday, November 22, 2006 6:41:02 AM

lol It's what dreams are made of, hence the title "Fantasy"... wink
Thanks for dropping by, it's so nice to hear from you smile

Melissa smile

dɹɐzılpǝkɔıw ɐʞɐ ɹǝɥgɐllɐg lǝbɐsıwickedlizard Thursday, November 23, 2006 3:54:42 PM

catching up on my posts! bigsmile


I very much like your poetry - you should turn them into song!

NikolaosNikolaosX1 Thursday, November 23, 2006 8:19:21 PM

...or you can publish them…. smile smile smile

-demiphonic Saturday, November 25, 2006 4:55:51 PM

awwwww.. you can tell everyone it's ME you're talking bout Melissa bigsmile

lollol ...kidding bigsmile

Nice Poem. My best line is "When he moves, the angels start in joyful play.".. very creative up

Melissa you are so beautiful, you can get pretty much any guy you want... you are one of the few who can make "Fantasy" reality. Take your time, choose wisely.

Happy hunting.

Melissahoneybe Saturday, November 25, 2006 6:17:50 PM

Hi Isabel and Nikolaos,
Thank you for your comments...
I'll definitely take it into consideration wink

Hey Randall,
Wow, what a very sweet comment!
Oh, I think it's too much credit for me to accept, thank you very much.
Hey, now I just need my shotgun for hunting wink

I really appreciate all your kind words.

Regards,
Melissa smile

-demiphonic Sunday, November 26, 2006 4:30:05 AM

wink

Quest2rest Thursday, November 30, 2006 10:09:37 AM

So much love. Must be some incredible guy who awakens such bliss in you. Wow.smile

rdmaloyjr Sunday, December 10, 2006 4:48:51 PM

The man in this poem sounds like Jesus.:-)

My blog: http://thecross.wordpress.com

sahil007 Tuesday, December 12, 2006 7:55:27 AM

hey, i joined opera comm. 2day n,i thnk found 1 of da most creative n smrt ppl ere! U rocks! Hats off 2 u! I really liked ur poetry. I wish ,if v cud b frndz! By dat way m frm india.

NikolaosNikolaosX1 Wednesday, December 13, 2006 4:34:29 PM

Welcome Sahi. Yes, she is the best!

flower20 Thursday, December 14, 2006 4:53:16 AM

hello
i hope u be good
contact me late i hope we be good friend for each other
bye for now
my email is: uner_some_trees@yahoo.com

Evasouthbeachgirl Tuesday, December 19, 2006 3:11:34 PM

When a girl writes a poem to someone like that. That's when you know where love comes from. And it also states the energy Melissa likes to put in motion, thus...the emotion of passion she feels.

Raghavrashman Sunday, March 11, 2007 6:49:09 PM

Hi Melissa,

Awesome poem. Is it autobiographical i.e. does the poem stem from your feelings for somebody who leads a nomadic lifestyle?

Am curious to know what inspired you to write the story.

-demiphonic Sunday, March 11, 2007 7:30:54 PM

Its me bigeyes I inspired her - back off ninja


lol (just kiddin') lol

Melissahoneybe Sunday, March 18, 2007 7:03:17 AM

Hey, it is strange that I often write about someone that's never around or close enough...
What can I say?
Other than...
Some things are better left as a mystery wink

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