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Like Dorothy and Toto, Went Over the Rainbow, To Blow Off Auntie Em

To Being One Of Us, For Once, Instead Of A Them

Angel Tears

Wednesday, 5. December 2007, 21:08:07

(this may suck, i wrote it a long time ago, so bear with me and please comment!)


this feeling, these feelings
they let my eyes see
but how can this being
of truancy be?

a single teardrop runs down yon angels face
and by fortune is wiped by the finger of grace
but still lives that sadness buried in her mind
so deep and discreet only god could find

but her prayers go unanswered,
the truth that is lost
it affected the future
a life was the cost

that this sense of lonliness could overcome hope
so everone weeps, and she leaves them to cope
now far away in a small place of peace
her untainted face, a frown to crease

as she ponders life's choices
made wrong or done right
and what went through her head
on the last lonely night

her sadness goes on, death could not destroy
it resides in us all, both girl and boy
the want of an end, the need for relief
like unto a tree with each falling leaf
(ebbing away....)

so on she cries, her tears cleanse our world
her banner of sunshine held highly, unfurled
bringing light to the others in need
now she has finally come to succeed

NaiivityOverseas (long distances)

Comments

MisterSunny 9. December 2007, 01:33

I loved the cadences in this piece. Wonderful word selection and not only did you rhyme well and creatively, but you told a story. That's what poetry is supposed to do, really. A lot of people lose track of that essential basis when they write. Also how glorious it is to read a poem that isn't plastered with repetition. Thumbs up!

jm081 10. December 2007, 21:22

*cries* wow nobody's ever been that nice! thank you so much...i thought my poetry sucked!

Kill_Joy_360 11. December 2007, 21:19

purdy picture, and awesome poem!

jm081 11. December 2007, 21:20

lol thanks kill joy! it means much!

supernd*4*spd 11. December 2007, 23:03

u want the dead effing truth right?......

that poem is reall REALLY amazing not joke
most ppl dont rhym when they do their own poem
and its a really good story line thingy. lol
but yeah the dead effing truth is...........
its really good jm


luv u!!!!!!





lol shleppy

jm081 14. December 2007, 20:53

OMG TRIS...I FRICKIN LOVE YOU! ITS NICE TO KNOW THAT FRIENDS KNOW HONESTY, AND ITS ALSO GREAT TO FIGURE OUT THAT I DONT SUCK QUITE AS BAD AS I THOUGHT I DID!

MORE POETRY TO COME, NOW, 4 SURE

supernd*4*spd 14. December 2007, 21:20

good im waiting

jm081 17. December 2007, 16:29

UM... WHAT U WAITING 4?

supernd*4*spd 17. December 2007, 16:40

u to hurry the god damn up with whatever it is that were gonna do

jm081 17. December 2007, 16:40

wtf?

supernd*4*spd 17. December 2007, 16:41

yeah that the same thing im thinking

jm081 17. December 2007, 16:44

LOL YESH I KNOW WHATZ U MEAN

I CAN HAS CHEEZBURGER?

LOL YA THATS ON SOMEONE'S PIC, WITH A CAT...IT WAS GREAT I LOVED IT!

BTW...WHY WASNT YOU AT THE PARTY?

mangostreen 17. December 2007, 16:49

That's a wonderful poem !

ivealwaysbeenevil 17. December 2007, 19:18

i think secretly....you knew it was good...you just wanted to hear it from other people....

jm081 17. December 2007, 20:24

OMG CAIT YOU ROX THE SOX!

UM IDK I SERIOUSLY THOUGHT IT WAS LIKE, AVERAGE, NOT ALL THAT GOOD. THEN MY FRIENDS TOLD ME TO PUT IT UP AND OTHERS LIKED IT SO NOW I THINK I REALLY DID THINK IT WAS GOOD ALL ALONG...I WAS JUST AFRAID OTHERS WOULDNT LIKE IT CUZ ALL THE PEOPLE I SHOWED IT TOO BEFORE WERE LIKE "OH YEAH W/E IT WAS OK".

LOL YA SERIOUS SELF CONFIDENCE ISSUES BUT IT DONT MATTER NOW!

jm081 17. December 2007, 20:24

THANKIES MANGOSTREEN!

ivealwaysbeenevil 18. December 2007, 00:00

well count on me to tell it like it is!

mangostreen?

supernd*4*spd 18. December 2007, 00:37

what perty are u talking bout?

jm081 18. December 2007, 16:26

WELL I CERTAINLY WOULDNT EXPECT YOU TOO LIE!

PERTY? NO CLUE WHATS GOING ON...

mangostreen 18. December 2007, 16:54

what are you talking about? I have just read it since yesterday. I realized that 'I like it'. That all.
"IVEALWAYSBEENEVIL" do you think I'm lying?

ivealwaysbeenevil 18. December 2007, 16:56

oh..lmao...i thought that mangostreen was one of her words!! lmao.

mangostreen 18. December 2007, 17:09

:eek:p::D

jm081 18. December 2007, 20:42

WOW...THIS FEELS LIKE SOME ALTERNATE REALITY...WOAH

supernd*4*spd 18. December 2007, 20:58

jm ur a freaking dork



SCHLEPPI!!!!!!!!!!

ivealwaysbeenevil 18. December 2007, 22:41

geez...

supernd*4*spd 18. December 2007, 22:43

what did i say

ivealwaysbeenevil 18. December 2007, 22:44

lol nothing! i'm laughing at myself and my mangosteen missunderstanding...

supernd*4*spd 18. December 2007, 22:50

oh i see now sorry

ivealwaysbeenevil 18. December 2007, 22:51

lol, you don't have to apologize cuz i'm a loser...

supernd*4*spd 18. December 2007, 22:52

no ur not

ivealwaysbeenevil 18. December 2007, 22:53

lol...uh...if you say so...

supernd*4*spd 18. December 2007, 22:55

well im saying soo then

ivealwaysbeenevil 18. December 2007, 22:56

well i'm saying ssssssssooooooooo!...muahaha...mine's bigger.

supernd*4*spd 18. December 2007, 23:04

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ivealwaysbeenevil 18. December 2007, 23:06

omg! your comment has a scroll bar!!! lmao.

supernd*4*spd 18. December 2007, 23:07

i know

ivealwaysbeenevil 18. December 2007, 23:09

that takes talent...lol. \m/

lol, jm is gonna come back and be like what the hell?...

supernd*4*spd 18. December 2007, 23:12

me 2

ivealwaysbeenevil 18. December 2007, 23:15

lol. uh...ok? but you're here now...so you don't have to wait for l8r.

supernd*4*spd 18. December 2007, 23:16

what plz dont get me all confused

ivealwaysbeenevil 18. December 2007, 23:17

i can't help it...it's so easy!!

k, well i g2g, l8r.

supernd*4*spd 18. December 2007, 23:18

bye

jm081 19. December 2007, 16:25

*laughs* WHAT THE HELL?

supernd*4*spd 19. December 2007, 18:38

nothing we were just talking

ivealwaysbeenevil 19. December 2007, 19:20

lol

jm081 19. December 2007, 20:21

YA JUST DOIN WHATCHA EXPECT

ripp2002 20. December 2007, 06:09

tis good

:devil:

ivealwaysbeenevil 20. December 2007, 15:57

thanx for being somewhat predictable lol. that's like a once in a lifetime thing.

supernd*4*spd 20. December 2007, 18:51

what? im lost here

ivealwaysbeenevil 20. December 2007, 19:28

I think we're all a little lost sometimes...

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