That door is closed
Sunday, 15. April 2007, 15:05:12
That door is closedSo much should she care
That cruel chillness
The frigidity freezes the air
That door is closed
Closed with her dreams
With a heart so heavy
Heavier than it seems
That door is closed
Her breath taken away
In the abysmal darkness
A lonely soul astray
WIDGETIZE
Gopal Mahadeva # 14. July 2007, 11:00
A nice poem! But it deserves more than just "nice". The "cruel chillness" adds to her gloominess.
Hmm.... I need to read it again and again to say anything about it. Well, I would like to say... "You write greatly!"
Gopal.