A red red rose
Monday, 23. April 2007, 15:28:23
I gaze at her in wonder and surprise
That delicate rose silently in bloom
Her dainty beauty just dazzles my eyes
And I am lost in her enchanting perfume
The crystal clear pearls that gracefully shine
Are dewdrops in the morn or angel’s tears
That burning petals like entrancing wine
Before her I forget the fleeting years
Allow me to become a tiny drip
And gently melt into her silent dream
Or be a butterfly to kiss her lip
And dance forever to her graceful beam
I’m here to stay with her and never part
To feel her breath, aroma and her heart
--by moonriver April 23,2007--
WIDGETIZE
Gopal Mahadeva # 14. July 2007, 10:52
Your sonnet is really great in its beauty and form. I like the rhyme scheme /a-b/a-b/.
Sister, but one thing I should say... why was it not written by me?
Moonriver, the couplet is just what I feel...
* * *
I’m here to stay with her and never part
To feel her breath, aroma and her heart
* * *
With best wishes...!
Yours lovingly,
Gopal.