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Essentially the Only One

by Richard

Verse 124

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The boat came closer to the ship,
But I nor spake nor stirred ;
The boat came close beneath the ship,
And straight a sound was heard.

Shot to death over a hamburgerCool

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lokutus_prime 5. September 2008, 21:31

Parody 124

Through the spray
of the ocean's bitter piss
a noisome thing with a raging thirst
was clothed in a seething midnight hiss,
it took a shape that snarled along
ready and waiting to burst.

Too late for prayers to an absent God!
He heard not the supplicants' plea,
as Satan smote the waves with a rod
that smashed all along the sea.

I knew not what would be the end,
nor whether I stayed alive,
as the moaning noise became a fiend
to strike in Verse 125.



:up:
http://my.opera.com/lokutus_prime/blog/2008/08/19/the-ancient-mariner

musickna 5. September 2008, 22:11

Apocalyptic, Loku! :lol: Another gem. :yes: :up: :yes: :cheers:

BabyJay99 6. September 2008, 01:57

musickna 6. September 2008, 02:00

Thank you, Leazz! Lovely to see your beautiful ship here! :yes:

lokutus_prime 6. September 2008, 13:47

Richard - thanks! :happy:


Princess L :yes: :yes: :yes:

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