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Essentially the Only One

by Richard

Verse 125

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Under the water it rumbled on,
Still louder and more dread :
It reached the ship, it split the bay ;
The ship went down like lead.

CoolSweet Irony

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lokutus_prime 6. September 2008, 22:16

Parody 125

Into the maw of Hell it went
and never a moment stayed,
the final breath
ere the ship's fast death,
unto an ocean grave.

I screamed aloud as the beckoning shroud
cast its shape o'er sea
"Sweet God above if there's any love
from Christ then I beg save me!"

The ferryman waits, his eyes dark slates,
he holds out his hand for a coin;
my shivering Soul must pay the toll
and there's no turning back to a dawn.

Fate calls to me from the edge of the Styx
and it likely will be in Verse 126.



:up:
http://my.opera.com/lokutus_prime/blog/2008/08/19/the-ancient-mariner

musickna 6. September 2008, 22:23

Brilliant! :yes: :up: :yes: Looks like Charon isn't going to get his obolus, and our Mariner is be on a different path. Look out Wedding Guest. :lol: Lovely, Loku!

edwardpiercy 7. September 2008, 16:29

They probably wouldn't have gotten much for that old ship anyway. Now, they're covered by the insurance.

LoKu. :up:

But if you want to get your kicks
You have to do it on Route 66

musickna 7. September 2008, 17:06

:lol: I don't know Ed, probably a lot of copper in that old tub. Hot stuff on the commodities market.

I love that song, by the way.

edwardpiercy 7. September 2008, 17:19

:lol:

:up:

lokutus_prime 7. September 2008, 23:04

ed :up: :lol:

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