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Essentially the Only One

by Richard

Verse 138

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To walk together to the kirk,
And all together pray,
While each to his great Father bends,
Old men, and babes, and loving friends
And youths and maidens gay !

What one seesVerse 139

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lokutus_prime 19. September 2008, 16:59

Parody 138

I raise my hand and glint my eye
in the jubilation of my cry!
O thou who listened to my tale,
saw me trembling, fearful frail
as ghastly memory held me tight,
know now I am escaped the night!

I give thee thanks. Thou art he
whose listening has set me free,
- unless fate shows a perfidy!
I will not dwell on that, 'tis time
to move toward Verse 139.


:up:
http://my.opera.com/lokutus_prime/blog/2008/08/19/the-ancient-mariner

musickna 19. September 2008, 18:26

Splendid, splendid!! :up: :up: :yes: :yes: :yes:

I find these last verses of the Rime incredibly moving, and you are keeping up fabulously!!!

:cheers: :yes: :yes: :yes: :hat: :hat: :sing: :up: :yes:

lokutus_prime 19. September 2008, 21:33

Richard - You are, as ever, a gracious, gentle, patien and kind host, generous in your response. :happy: I thank you most gratefully :happy: This Rime has been the most tremendously technical and moving and wondrous poetry challenge I have ever met.
I am glad I have faced it and made more than a fist of it.:happy:
Soon I shall revert back to Verse Three, for it awaits my Parody unto Verse 79, to complete this mammoth task in its entirety.

Whatever else I have written in my four years blog and however else I am considered, for I will pass into relative obscurity eventually, in the long run I hope my Parody will be remembered. A good friend recently opined that he and I were similar because, he said, we both sought adulation. I have not yet had time to correct him in reply because it is recognition that I seek and this is not the same. The former might be regarded as a self-centered ambition, the latter would be regarded as wanting to be read for the value of one's writing. I aspire to the latter - always. :up:

PainterWoman 20. September 2008, 04:12

Loku, I don't know how you keep up with this. It is difficult for me just to keep up with the daily comments and blogs I've subscribed to.

lokutus_prime 20. September 2008, 13:07

It is difficult for me just to keep up with the daily comments and blogs I've subscribed to.


It's not easy. But I try to do what is possible. The impossible I leave to others. :up:

musickna 20. September 2008, 14:31

Loku is a truly dedicated blogger in a way that others of us (including me) will never emulate! :cheers: And the blog world is better for it, for sure! :up:

lokutus_prime 20. September 2008, 15:06

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