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Talking To You

welcome to where you belong

once a little Rabbit

my night was very normal; I found nothing to do but to stay at my chambre, the wheather was very bad, and my parents left home to visit my sister in the South of the country. exhosted and consumed by the long hours of work, I tryed to sleep, But I had one of those nights where sleeping is yet to nock on my head, and am still trying...

Once upon a time,
--------------- I was lying on bed
An eye held open,
--------------- The other half-closed
my arms and legs are heavy
--------------- the light is softly on
winds started to blow
--------------- the old cracking drain
'sleeping' I want to go
--------------- but sleeping has missed my train
for long I kept still
--------------- till somthing made a sound


************** A sound that broke into the room and covered all the whispers of the winds, I merly can see through the shade of the light of candles That I use when ever the power in cut... somthing was moving... what would that little thing be??!! Is it a ....? but HOW...?

A rabbit sneaked-in
---------------And tried to make some fun
Started sniffing around,
---------------Jump, Gallop and run
Nice and pretty looking,
---------------Furry and fluffy like cotton
Coloured in blue and white,
---------------its head was totally bright

************** with a mixture of feelings that varied between the pleasure and worry, I tryed t figure out How...???

I wonder for a second,
---------------how did it get to here?!!
I turned towards the door
---------------that was closed and latched
The window wasn't an option;
---------------closed early that night
From top it can’t be coming,
---------------my ceiling is nicely made
“From under the bed it entered”
---------------I thought maybe it might

************** I always loved having a pet a home, and a rabbit is a pretty nice one. I felt in need to its presence in my room where I hardy allowed any person to enter.. I could never touch it nor even get to feed from my hand as cats do,it was keen to jump and hide, yet still it comes before me in the opposite corner of the room, I felt loving its presence ever more. time passed quickly and the rabbit is funnier day by day till another night... that very night...

on bed I was and said:
--------------- ‘it’s lovely and very pleasant’
It felt really at ease,
---------------- as if I weren’t present
I lifted a bit my head,
---------------- so I can see better
Stoned ‘n frozen It turned,
---------------- thrilled about the matter
Its eyes widely open,
---------------- Seductive with their glitter
I stretched long my hand
---------------- to catch from the under
Quickly and very sudden
---------------- Its teeth grew bigger
I couldn’t pull my hand
---------------- Without a bitten finger

‘I surely must be dreaming’
---------------- For that is what it seems
That bite wouldn’t hurt
---------------- at least if I was in dreams

the body grew larger
---------------- its head and ears are different
legs are higher and streight
---------------- the tail became thiker
the muzle forwardly pulled
---------------- the jaws turned canine
the little bunny is now
---------------- an ugly ferocious hyen(a)



May be next time...
If I can make it out of this plot...
I will hear from you If you had ever met such a rabbit

Lost in SpaceDefeated

Comments

amel2 27. November 2008, 11:25

i enjoyed this article but there's something gummy...what's wrong with you, too?
what's the rabbit according to you?
is it I, you, they, we?
you're a great poet and writer...you know as well how you do it and when...congratulations

shipka45 30. November 2008, 10:58

I have read it several times to deduce what wanted with it to be said... the nightmare or something else wanted it signalize....but happens such things sometimes...and what is the worst not only in the dreams....

PainterWoman 30. November 2008, 11:27

This was interesting how it turned from a thought while half asleep (like a daydream), then to a dream, then a nightmare.

nedjmek 3. December 2008, 09:19

thanks all for giving some of your time and reading these lines that I wrote with great passion to your work on each of your blogs, facinated by the shouting feminine sense on you words , ladys...
and yes, the rabbit does exist if you want it to be there...... where?? when?? how??

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