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De tardes olvidadas - Forgotten afternoons (esp-eng)

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Pues si, ya van más de 10 días de lluvia en época de verano. Por eso aquí va algo de mis tardes sobre un papel.

Well, it's been raining since 10 days, in this summertime. So, here goes someting of my afternoons on a paper.


De tardes olvidadas.

Lluvias que siguen visitando mis tardes
recuerdos de dias viejos que no se marchan.
hay hoy un aroma a calles mojadas y tardes entre amigos,
un pasado olvidado que vuelve a la memoria
y se queda.

Nubes que envuelven el cielo,
que lo pintan de gris y me contagian.
hay una sensación de paz extraña,
una fantasía difícil de explicar
en soledad.

Música que es un invento para jugar
a ser viajeros del tiempo y del mundo.
Te extraño por las noches, te olvido cada día,
pero no puedo dejarte marchar,
jamás.


Forgotten afternoons.

Rains that continue visiting my afternoons
Memories of old days that don't leave.
There is today an aroma to wet streets and afternoon with friends,
a forgotten past that comes to my memory
and it stays.

Clouds that wrap the sky,
and paint it of gray and they make me the same.
There is a sensation of strange peace,
a fantasy difficult to explain
in solitude.

Music is an invention to play
to be traveling through time and through the world.
I miss you at nights, I forget you every day ,
but I can't let you go,
never again.

Las cosas caenVisions from my window

Comments

brokenheartvn 6. March 2008, 16:30

very nice poem
i discover you are also talented poet :yes:

pbuydid 6. March 2008, 16:56

Thanks!
Do you really think so?
Mmm, I love write to express what is hidden inside. I'm not good speaking, although I had to learn: I can't be a teacher if I don't speak :wink:

But poems are good to express our real feelings. You know about it because you write very nice.

brokenheartvn 7. March 2008, 09:12

yes, its exactly what im thinking of now :wink:...keep writting when you have inspirations...i do believe poems have magic, especially they come from heart...they connect deep and profound feelings of people's heart , people like you and me, who enjoy life and love, live through the good and the bad, and wish to share those feelings with others...so dont be afraid to show what inside to outside , its always in better understanding :smile:

pbuydid 7. March 2008, 16:33

Then we are privileged people :wink:
We (and all people who writes) see the world with different eyes.
It's good to see you are open minded, and you can expect the same from me, be sure.

Last days I've been under that light of inspiration. I miss that when days goes and nothing is born from my pen.

brokenheartvn 10. March 2008, 16:06

i see...open minded, thats im trying to keep
we can see and discover many thing if we can keep it
support you, always :yes: :up:

pbuydid 10. March 2008, 19:30

You have a good talent expressed in through your blog. And it's not a "closed" blog. I've been watching many comments since we are friends, and I see you allow everyone to express. Even when someone made a discussion about you and your avatar, you could reply him correctly.

So we feel comfortable there :smile:

brokenheartvn 11. March 2008, 08:25

oh, thank you
just im trying to keep open mind
it helps me to get all your open opinions through time
i have learned much from it

greenwitch3 17. April 2008, 22:50

Vaya vaya vaya, con que agradable sorpresa me acabo de encontrar. Mi querido amigo pbuydid, aparte de todos los talentos que tiene, es un magnifico poeta. Que lindo poema has escrito, simplemente me encantó. Sabes? a mi me encanta poner las cosas lindas que me encuentro en los diferentes blogs, en el mio, para compartirlo con mis amigos que me hacen el favor de leerme. Me das permiso de postear esta obra de arte en mi cueva? Claro que te daria todos los créditos. Podria yo ? bug bug bug

pbuydid 18. April 2008, 17:50

:D
Sería todo un placer, aunque me van a subir los colores a la cara de tantas lindas palabras de tu parte!
Bueno, si lo que haga logra cosas positivas en la gente, me puedo sentir feliz.

Tienes todo mi permiso :smile: Y gracias por tu lindo comentario!!

greenwitch3 18. April 2008, 21:45

Pues manos a la obra, este mismo fin de semana queda esta maravilla en mi cueva...gracias amigo querido....bug bug bug

pbuydid 18. April 2008, 23:07

Pues gracias, entonces. Muy feliz!!

greenwitch3 19. April 2008, 17:13

:happy: :happy: :happy: bug bug

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