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Infinite

Tuesday, 21. April 2009, 23:02:03

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What if I want to close my eyes, and watch nothing...
What if I want to fall deep inside of myself...
What if my life is hanging from emptyness
and my words are hidden today?

________Would you take a time for holding me?
________Would you be here to take me?

What if I watch this day in grey and grey...
what if i listen just echoes of crying...
What if I take myself to reach the infinite
of soul that is deeper than life?

________Would you understand my words then...?
________There's nothing to express in this place.

________Just fall to infinite
________and play with grey.

CulterPaulus
21/4/09

About the possibility of Dengue in UruguayFirst day at Pan De Azúcar Public Secondary School - Primer día en Liceo de Pan de Azúcar (Eng-Esp)

Comments

Anna 22. April 2009, 10:52

... Is it YOURS?!

Pablo 22. April 2009, 12:42

Yes, Anna. Too bad??

Anna 22. April 2009, 13:42

Very GOOD!!! There's style, and rhythm, and tension, and idea... Excellent!!! I'm impressed a lot... :faint:

Pablo 22. April 2009, 21:19

Wow, your words make me feel like nothing else!! really thank you!!
:happy: :happy:

Anna 23. April 2009, 07:58

I'm a philologyst by education, so a properly written essay or poem brings a lot of pleasure to me... like a sip of good wine

Pablo 23. April 2009, 14:41

I'm glad to contribute to that, then.
I like to write, it makes me good, when I have to take things out of me. I'm not too expresive speaking

Anna 23. April 2009, 14:58

I know the feeling, you can be sure! :wink:
But I know it's rather difficult to express oneself in a foreign language... to find the proper words... to arrange them grammatically... to emphasise right things...
You are very courageous, I should say!

Pablo 23. April 2009, 15:20

Agree. It's not so easy for me in english. When I write in spanish is like opening myself more than ever. But I love english, and it's a way to practise. Sometimes I take some inspiration in that language, and then I try to write something. Sometimes it works.

I had some fear when I started writing my posts here, in english. But now I feel better :D

Anna 23. April 2009, 17:55

:yes: A good practice in English is one of the main things that I like about MyOpera community. Not the only one of course but still very important!

Arèir 26. April 2009, 10:20

It is really good!
First I thought it was lyrics from a song, but then it occurred to me that it was your poem!

Pablo 26. April 2009, 18:19

:D Thanks!
Maybe someone would try to compose the music :D , not me (I'm not good in that art :D )

Arèir 26. April 2009, 19:32

yes maybe :smile:

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