My OperaJune 3
Saturday, June 16, 2012 3:53:04 AM
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I've been dying on this, overworking over and over, again and again. It's kinda ironic as I define myself as a "first touch" person.
I usually never "rework" my drawings, but here, it has been about the colors, the layout, the text and so... Asking my friends for review and proof-read, opinions, etc... I couldn't make up my mind and decide it was "ready".
Maybe because it's political, maybe because it's a kind of report, maybe this or that...
Anyway, no French version YET, and still likely to be modified. Stay in touch, roger, roger.
comments and critics are welcome, that goes without saying.
btw, I had the change to discuss later with some of the performers, who explained to me many aspect of their performance. I did not inclued those explanations here YET, it will probably be another post. My present drawing/report puts you in the situation I was, as a "naive" witness. Deal with it, that's the point
EDIT: some grammar mistakes corrected thanks to the help of Treblig and Mickey Joe. Thanks a lot for your help guys
I've been dying on this, overworking over and over, again and again. It's kinda ironic as I define myself as a "first touch" person.
I usually never "rework" my drawings, but here, it has been about the colors, the layout, the text and so... Asking my friends for review and proof-read, opinions, etc... I couldn't make up my mind and decide it was "ready".
Maybe because it's political, maybe because it's a kind of report, maybe this or that...
Anyway, no French version YET, and still likely to be modified. Stay in touch, roger, roger.
comments and critics are welcome, that goes without saying.
btw, I had the change to discuss later with some of the performers, who explained to me many aspect of their performance. I did not inclued those explanations here YET, it will probably be another post. My present drawing/report puts you in the situation I was, as a "naive" witness. Deal with it, that's the point
EDIT: some grammar mistakes corrected thanks to the help of Treblig and Mickey Joe. Thanks a lot for your help guys
Unregistered user # Sunday, June 17, 2012 2:00:49 AM
Uncle MickMickeyjoe-Irl # Thursday, June 28, 2012 11:08:07 AM
Ok, because I'm afraid I noticed a few typos in the text.
stucked should just be stuck.
lift and hold > lifts and holds or lifted and held
striked > struck
emphasizing > I think you meant empathising
breathes > breaths (A man lets out breaths as he breathes) Though that is a tricky one.
Hope you don't mind me pointing these out
Pfeleleppfelelep # Thursday, June 28, 2012 4:08:27 PM
thank you so much, for taking time to correct me
Uncle MickMickeyjoe-Irl # Thursday, June 28, 2012 5:23:03 PM
Pfeleleppfelelep # Friday, June 29, 2012 8:44:39 AM
thank you, for helping me on the english version. This "team-working" art-piece gets a real new value now.
Liu # Thursday, July 26, 2012 7:26:16 PM