The Ship

Monday, October 8, 2007 12:37:06 AM

Bound with my own pain.
Trapped in my own sorrow.
Tortured by my own memories.
banished by my own thoughts

Hope cuts the bands.
Joy is the key to set me free.
Forgetting slows the whip.
Sleep brings the ship.

The Way We Should BeForget Never

Comments

Deondeon4u Thursday, October 11, 2007 7:26:30 PM

I hope that ship is full off love and peace

Daleypinkwaterbug Friday, October 19, 2007 10:06:43 PM

this poem i think needs to be read twice once clear through and next the first line of the first paragraph then the first line of the second paragaph and so forth. it makes a lot more sense
hope you like.

DesertDawg Friday, October 26, 2007 12:13:24 AM

Keep up the good work! Carry a pencil and pad with you now and forever. And ALWAYS WRITE DOWN YOUR INSPIRATIONS. Good Luck.

Daleypinkwaterbug Friday, October 26, 2007 5:57:30 PM

thanxs
im glad u understood it alot of people dont
i won a award for this one

Garrettthephntm Friday, November 9, 2007 10:30:52 PM

i like this one

Daleypinkwaterbug Sunday, November 11, 2007 9:35:04 PM

thanx

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