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The Ship

Monday, 8. October 2007, 00:37:06

Bound with my own pain.
Trapped in my own sorrow.
Tortured by my own memories.
banished by my own thoughts

Hope cuts the bands.
Joy is the key to set me free.
Forgetting slows the whip.
Sleep brings the ship.

The Way We Should BeForget Never

Comments

deon4u 11. October 2007, 19:26

I hope that ship is full off love and peace

pinkwaterbug 19. October 2007, 22:06

this poem i think needs to be read twice once clear through and next the first line of the first paragraph then the first line of the second paragaph and so forth. it makes a lot more sense
hope you like.

DesertDawg 26. October 2007, 00:13

Keep up the good work! Carry a pencil and pad with you now and forever. And ALWAYS WRITE DOWN YOUR INSPIRATIONS. Good Luck.

pinkwaterbug 26. October 2007, 17:57

thanxs
im glad u understood it alot of people dont
i won a award for this one

thephntm 9. November 2007, 22:30

i like this one

pinkwaterbug 11. November 2007, 21:35

thanx

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