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Am I Not Deserve To Get The Light?

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I lost in the desert, only dust I can see.. no water, no people.. too much bright from the Sun, It's on the top of my head.. I feel nothing.. can not feel anything because of too much burned. I fallen from the downhill.. falls down to the bowels of the earth.. dark and burned inside the bowels.. what can I hear there?... I hear nothing because I fell too deep.. I fallen into the very deep ocean.. so dark, too cold.. only Coral I can see.. so quite.. trying for swimming to the surface, but very tired, feet in freeze.. I see nothing.. too much dark and no light. I Need a Light... Please Give Me a Light.

TILL RUNNER-UPEaster 2012

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Carlosprincecarlosprince Thursday, April 5, 2012 4:46:49 PM

Oh you need a light, may the grow of light fill your heart

lovecounsellor Thursday, April 5, 2012 6:17:01 PM

TOUCHING.......LIGHT OF HOPE IN ALL NEGATIVE SITUATION......THOSE WHO TRY TO SEE IN DARK GET LIGHT FOR SURE IN LIFE......THERE IS BRIGHT SUNNY MORNING AFTER A DARK NIGHT

MPENDULO Y SHONGWEyanda2047 Friday, April 6, 2012 5:46:52 PM

akey olryt

Ntokozo • White Phosphorus• JaftaXquiziTpro Friday, April 6, 2012 5:50:33 PM

Pray

John leonardjleonny Thursday, April 12, 2012 7:33:59 AM

good.keep it up!on my side i feel expresing my tension by writing if there will be no roam to talk.exellent.

deeLD37 Monday, April 23, 2012 4:09:38 PM

thank u evryone smile

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