Poetry In Motion

Invisible Girl

By Invisableinvisablegirl. Sunday, June 3, 2012 6:40:37 AM

When I speak do you actually hear me, or do you just listen? When I write do you really understand the words or do you just read? How can I make you notice me if I'm just invisible? I walk through the halls like a ghost. Staring into the only thing that can see me. Am I unworthy for you? Do you just don't see me because I'm not like them? I'm sorry for the mistake that I'm am. At least I'm myself, but being myself makes me less and less visible. Just invisible.

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Comments

jjubjjubj # Monday, June 4, 2012 3:39:34 PM

Interesting text about visibility. It is true one is often invisible in a visible crowd.
How does one make one's poem visible on this web log and web post?

Thanks

benjamin franckcsano # Friday, June 8, 2012 7:41:45 PM

Great

fieona khaderfieona # Sunday, June 10, 2012 8:44:15 PM

I feel u !!

Doc mythdocmyth # Friday, June 15, 2012 5:08:48 PM

Nice:)

yeankuzz # Saturday, June 23, 2012 9:34:59 AM

I understand all ur poems more than u can imagine. Good 4 u to be able to put ur toughts down

Mukhtar AkpopireboMukhterra # Saturday, June 23, 2012 12:47:23 PM

Yeankuzz, I can tell you're now visible.
Not only that, you're also tangible.
You thoughts radiate and are beautiful,
And as a poem they are so intelligible.

yeankuzz # Monday, June 25, 2012 8:12:55 PM

Mukhtera d poem is nt mine it was written by invisable jst wish i cld put down my own thoughts like her then everytin wil be easier 4 me

Mukhtar AkpopireboMukhterra # Monday, June 25, 2012 8:44:27 PM

You can. I know you can. Even what you've just written is some form of a poem.

jjubjjubj # Wednesday, July 18, 2012 5:53:18 PM

the best way to be visible in the distance is to wear a high visibility vest, fluorescent orange or yellow. It is very common item in the rail industry.