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My message in a bottle

To a late friend

,

The moment right before leaping
to where you felt you should go
you dreamt of dreamless sleeping
or hoped it just might be so

The thought of you saving your soul
was exactly what scared you to death
Saving souls was never your goal
you were just trying to catch your breath.

As long as your soul was within you
you could never feel you were free
With a whisper you bid ev´ry soul adieu
and we waved you goodbye, Marie




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Richard 29. October 2006, 13:26

That's a very moving and evocative poem and photograph. The story of a suicide, it seems to me. Very sad.

San 29. October 2006, 18:01

...shivers...

Thomas Bojer Eltorp 29. October 2006, 19:27

So very sad, beautiful but sad.

A truly amazing photo:up:

Allan, what is the technical secret behind it, if I may ask?
I have tried creating an effect like that, so far unsuccessful.

Allan 29. October 2006, 20:14

Suicide all right, Richard. Long time ago - but still emotionally present.

The tech-stuff: Photoshop, choose filters, blur,radial blur, check zoom, adjust centre and amount - then go.

Thanks all for reading and watching my fiddling about.

Thomas Bojer Eltorp 29. October 2006, 22:10

Thanks allan:)

Tried to create it IRL... rather difficult:D

Asgeir 30. October 2006, 14:30

Very sad...... But well told


Excelent Photo

Ramute 30. October 2006, 18:04

Very touching poem and a wonderful picture...I guess you put your heart into it.

Love,
Ramute.
:smile:

hungryghost 31. October 2006, 04:22

Yes, very sad sentiments, and such an appropriate photo composition that captures the feeling well.

take care

Allan 31. October 2006, 22:00

Thank you for reading, folks.

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