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My message in a bottle

Nous Sommes Enfants du Soleil

Monday, 31. August 2009, 11:44:45

,



Moving about
town today
feeling low

Life is short
like a wink
of the eye

Like a breath
a whisper
or a sigh

A glimpse
made me look
to the sky

The sun's got kids
one of them
on top floor

Give me a wink
a flicker
from above

look up
behold
one moment more

Some Saturday SillynessThe Seventies

Comments

Nicolas Borgsmidt 30. August 2009, 09:22

Life. Here and now :up: :happy:

Well caught and well spoken Allan :smile:

Léazz 30. August 2009, 11:29

:love:

der Wandersmann 30. August 2009, 14:32

Thank you, Allan.

PainterWoman 30. August 2009, 14:34

Beautiful....:heart:

Darko 30. August 2009, 16:12

The sky is so deep blue. It never gets like this down here :smile:

der Wandersmann 30. August 2009, 16:21

Polarising filter?

muse 30. August 2009, 16:24

"one moment more" that line conveys so much hope and beauty.

Allan 30. August 2009, 16:40

Thank you everybody. Glad you understand :smile:

No polarizer. The sky was like that.

Angeliki 30. August 2009, 17:18

lovely!
a breath and a hope and a sun ray :heart:

Stardancer 30. August 2009, 18:20

"look up
behold
one moment more"

One moment more.

:smile:

Ana 30. August 2009, 18:46

Cool! :up:

And here was dull gray-cloudy day, but it was really fresh, unlike previous days. :smile:

scott cumming 30. August 2009, 21:20

good thinking allan, good feeling too. as light as a sunbeam, heavy as the moon. :happy: now can be an eternity. but life is too short.

Edward Piercy 30. August 2009, 22:11

"The sun's got kids"

A very good metaphor, Allan.

And a very good poem, -- in my memory at least, your best -- or at least my favorite.

Stardancer 31. August 2009, 00:19

Originally posted by edwardpiercy:

And a very good poem, -- in my memory at least, your best -- or at least my favorite.


Ditto.

:up:

Edward Piercy 31. August 2009, 01:14

Also reminded me of something. Thought you might possibly like this.

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=fb_sDUXx4uY&hl=en&gl=CA&client=mv-google

Allan 31. August 2009, 05:58

I love your comments.

Oh, yes Ed. Haydn has that feeling.

studio41 2. September 2009, 07:32

lovely how you put feelings, experience, picture and words together... thank you for sharing, Allan.

Allan 2. September 2009, 07:43

Thank you so much.

studio41 2. September 2009, 08:07

:heart:

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