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Swimming In Air

Friday, July 10, 2009 7:11:31 AM

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During these days of
being dragged to the ground
I look to the birds

I want, I wish
to spread my wings and fly
lift off from the ground

To happily forget
what heavily weighs me down
swimming in air

Having only one thing
on my previously troubled mind
- where to catch a fish

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Comments

KimberlySqueakeyCat Friday, July 10, 2009 7:19:10 AM

lovely poem and picture

Anonymous Friday, July 10, 2009 8:05:07 AM

Anita Thomhave Simonsen writes: Hi Allan ! Beautiful text and You are a lovely person...

Nicolas Borgsmidtnopanic Friday, July 10, 2009 9:34:45 AM

Beautiful words and photo Allan. The feeling you describe feels close.

Norfridnorfrid Friday, July 10, 2009 10:31:05 AM

Beautiful. up

Darkogdare Friday, July 10, 2009 12:45:26 PM

bigsmile

PainterWoman Friday, July 10, 2009 1:31:10 PM

I like this very much Allan. To me, very deep words coming from you as I read between the lines. You lighten it with your last line "where to catch a fish" that made me smile.

der WandersmannderWandersmann Friday, July 10, 2009 1:41:00 PM

Let's hope it's a fish ... and not some garbage thrown away from the human world.

Angelikiellinidata Friday, July 10, 2009 3:43:09 PM

perfect picture and poem,
perfect together! heart

Allanricewood Friday, July 10, 2009 5:29:37 PM

Thanks, all. Nice to feel understood smile

Stardancer Friday, July 10, 2009 11:51:44 PM

Beautiful.

smile



RuneSB Saturday, July 11, 2009 10:50:41 AM

heart up

Edward Piercyedwardpiercy Saturday, July 11, 2009 7:24:36 PM

Makes me hungry for fish. Or maybe lobster. bigsmile

Allanricewood Saturday, July 11, 2009 8:00:12 PM

Still more thanks. So glad you popped by.

Ed, are you developing expensive habits?

Edward Piercyedwardpiercy Saturday, July 11, 2009 8:13:54 PM

What is the saying? "Champagne tastes on a beer budget." lol

Allanricewood Saturday, July 11, 2009 9:32:22 PM

I learned a new saying today smile

studio41 Monday, July 13, 2009 7:47:58 AM

this is absolutely great! wonderful photo and poem. smile
I hope you soar...

Richardmusickna Monday, July 13, 2009 1:36:13 PM

Lovely, Allan. I know those feelings well! smile

Nguyễn Hồng Minhhongminh1288 Wednesday, July 15, 2009 10:12:08 AM

nice poem smile. The bird on your photo seems very free, can spread his wings and fly whenever he wants ... smile

der WandersmannderWandersmann Wednesday, July 15, 2009 2:11:23 PM

No bird has ever solved a problem that he could fly away from.

Allanricewood Wednesday, July 15, 2009 7:22:50 PM

Thank you, all commenters.

Wandersmann, sorry - I may be a bit slow, but I don't think I get your drift. Would you care to elaborate? It sounds interesting.

der WandersmannderWandersmann Thursday, July 16, 2009 3:55:30 AM

Droppings.

Allanricewood Thursday, July 16, 2009 7:00:26 AM

bigsmile

Of course...

AnchyAnitaMargita Thursday, July 16, 2009 4:13:28 PM

Excellent... smile

Allanricewood Thursday, July 16, 2009 4:14:29 PM

TY smile