studio41

Remembering You

Saturday, 7. November 2009, 09:35:03

A girl was talking on her phone
A boy was running to the stone
A man would not leave me alone

As I was in the garden.

The geese were walking, then floating by,
The willow weeping ‘gainst the sky,
The water, gone blossoms just seemed to cry

As I, alone, was scared--

Remember now
That You were there…

JMR
November 7, 2009

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Comments

Lois # 7. November 2009, 12:36

Very beautiful!

Ana # 7. November 2009, 18:29

Very nice, Jill! Both photo and words.

Darko # 7. November 2009, 18:51

Nice poem

Nice Photoshopping, too

Deb Platt # 7. November 2009, 19:46

I thought the photoshopping gave the scene a dream-like quality that added to the disorientation. Nicely complemented the poem.

PainterWoman # 8. November 2009, 16:26

Nice poem Jill.

Interesting effect on the photo. It's rather surreal.

Aprilsnow 四月雪 # 9. November 2009, 04:48

"The willow weeping ‘gainst the sky", I like it very much.

The photo seems to be a familiar Japanese/Chinese garden I saw somewhere before, can't remember.

Olga # 9. November 2009, 14:19

as if this tree is from fairy tail! So beautiful...

Nguyễn Hồng Minh # 10. November 2009, 08:35

nice poem. And your photo is beautiful and.. original ^^ I love them

MrLeffe # 10. November 2009, 19:25

So very beautiful. I wanted to follow the creek to see where it ends. A beautiful Poem and picture

studio41 # 11. November 2009, 18:14

thank you very much- the lighting was at dusk, then became dark quickly... took the photo from the ground and the orange and reds kept the light as everything else blackened- (sort of how tomotoes retain such heat when cooked!) and with a little help from editing, it created what Pam called a surreal effect. I thought, too.

MrLeffe # 11. November 2009, 20:47

All very nice