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Remembering You

Saturday, November 7, 2009 9:35:03 AM

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A girl was talking on her phone
A boy was running to the stone
A man would not leave me alone

As I was in the garden.

The geese were walking, then floating by,
The willow weeping ‘gainst the sky,
The water, gone blossoms just seemed to cry

As I, alone, was scared--

Remember now
That You were there…


JMR
November 7, 2009

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Comments

Loiscakkleberrylane Saturday, November 7, 2009 12:36:32 PM

Very beautiful!

AnchyAnitaMargita Saturday, November 7, 2009 6:29:36 PM

Very nice, Jill! Both photo and words. smile

Darkogdare Saturday, November 7, 2009 6:51:43 PM

Nice poem up
Nice Photoshopping, too wink

Deb Plattdebplatt Saturday, November 7, 2009 7:46:24 PM

I thought the photoshopping gave the scene a dream-like quality that added to the disorientation. Nicely complemented the poem. up

PainterWoman Sunday, November 8, 2009 4:26:05 PM

Nice poem Jill.

Interesting effect on the photo. It's rather surreal.

Aprilsnow 四月雪Aprilsnow Monday, November 9, 2009 4:48:21 AM

"The willow weeping ‘gainst the sky", I like it very much. smile

The photo seems to be a familiar Japanese/Chinese garden I saw somewhere before, can't remember.

OlgaOlgita Monday, November 9, 2009 2:19:22 PM

as if this tree is from fairy tail! So beautiful... happy

Nguyễn Hồng Minhhongminh1288 Tuesday, November 10, 2009 8:35:18 AM

nice poem. And your photo is beautiful and.. original ^^ I love them smile

Eva MrLeffe Tuesday, November 10, 2009 7:25:35 PM

So very beautiful. I wanted to follow the creek to see where it ends. A beautiful Poem and picture smile smile

studio41 Wednesday, November 11, 2009 6:14:30 PM

thank you very much- the lighting was at dusk, then became dark quickly... took the photo from the ground and the orange and reds kept the light as everything else blackened- (sort of how tomotoes retain such heat when cooked!) and with a little help from editing, it created what Pam called a surreal effect. I thought, too.

Eva MrLeffe Wednesday, November 11, 2009 8:47:05 PM

All very nice smile smile

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