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Two - From Darkness I Come

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It's stopped.
I can't feel the motion anymore. Have we arrived? Is there a 'we'? It's just dark and quiet now...wait, what was that noise? A bang not too far away...sounded like metal on metal, somewhere above me. It bangs again, and again, filling my prison with sound and making me wish to somehow cover my ears.
Now there's a screeching, scraping sound which makes me clench my teeth, and then suddenly voices.
"Is this all of them?"
"It had better be. Gustavo won't be pleased if we missed another truck."
"Better get in there and count them."
"Lights on first. You remember what happened to Yuri."
"Poor bastard. Ok, they're on."
They are? I still can't see a thing. I squint and blink a few times, but still not even a glimmer.
"48...49...50, ok, we got the lot. Let's get them into the plane."
A few minutes pass, then suddenly light appears in front of me as one of them lifts the box that unbeknownst to me was blocking my sight. I blink furiously, trying to see. As things come into focus, i find an enormous bearded face looking right at me.
"Holy shit, this one's alive!"

One - Something Ticked Off This Way ComesThree - Here Be Demons

Comments

Cois 10. June 2008, 08:46

:eyes: holy shit!
Is it a human? I wanna know! The suspense is killing me!

Dacotah 10. June 2008, 09:31

:D

Furie 10. June 2008, 09:43

:sherlock:

attilasoul 10. June 2008, 09:54

:eek:

rose-marie 10. June 2008, 11:42

I like this concept! :D

Oh, and :insane:

Spaggyj 11. June 2008, 08:44

:left: :right: :wait:

theoddbod 11. June 2008, 21:10

:eyes:

I wonder when the next part will appear! :sherlock: What is hidden in the mysterious beard? What did happen to Yuri? Will Cois survive the vicious onslaught of the suspense beast?

Furie 12. June 2008, 00:15

Yuri? Beard? :idea:.
*comes up with a convoluted spoon bending version of the plot*
Of course! It's so simple. Homer: Doh!

theoddbod 12. June 2008, 07:28

It says Yuri, not Uri Geller :rolleyes:p:

Euro_cure-o 12. June 2008, 09:43

I'm scared.
Are you sure you wouldn't rather tell us the one about Goldilocks?
(No, that was scary too.)
Red Riding Hood!
(No, I forgot the wolf.)
Um, Hansel and Gretel?
(No, what am I thinking?)
Sorry, Mart. Go ahead.

ellena 14. June 2008, 10:09

Please post the next one sooon.... I have just started reading your stories.. am hooked already... :smile:

Furie 14. June 2008, 10:37

Good isn't he, despite his insistance on spelling names correctly to mess up my plots. :mad:

theoddbod 14. June 2008, 10:58

:o:p::D

I'd probably have posted the third part yesterday, but an unholy alliance of both Opera being down and my phone's data connection being the worst it's ever been rather spoilt my mood.

Monday is more likely, now :D.

ellena 14. June 2008, 11:19

Well, cant wait for monday then. I usually despise mondays... back to work day :frown:

funz81 14. June 2008, 21:26

Ah :idea: a bunch of hamsters being exported to... er... Bahama? :left:

theoddbod 14. June 2008, 21:53

Is this something you've done before? :eyes:

funz81 14. June 2008, 21:57

Are you posting from Bahama? :eyes:

theoddbod 14. June 2008, 22:46

Of course not :left:

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