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Yo-Yo

It was such a long way down.

What was he doing up here on this damn ledge? Making an end of himself? Bah, he hadn't given up, not yet. So he was a freak now, so what?! Who cared what his moronic family thought - he was something else now, something better.

Of course, killing his sister as he fled hadn't been intentional. It meant he was going to have to do this very soon, thanks to those two cops inching towards him on either side. But no matter - he was ready.

He let go of the window ledge and stood there poised, the wind gently buffeting him. Then he leapt into space. For a few moments he plummeted, then his new wings spread themselves and he levelled out fifty feet from the ground, screaming his triumph as he soared over the traffic jam below. A few strong beats of his wings and he was level again with the ledge, laughing at the cops as they stood there open-mouthed. Then off he flew again, heading back to the lab where it all began, where - caaaaawk!


For a moment the boy and the bird hung in the air where they'd collided. Then they fell.

It was such a long way down.

PointlessGrumpy

Comments

H82typ 17. November 2008, 10:45

Poetic justice? :sherlock: :up:

funz81 17. November 2008, 12:21

Poor boy :eyes:

Furie 17. November 2008, 17:15

Who told you? :mad:

rose-marie 17. November 2008, 17:28

:eyes: Flap your wings, boy!

Cois 17. November 2008, 20:34

I see some X-men in there p:

theoddbod 17. November 2008, 21:05

@Mik : Er...what? :confused::eyes: Er...rose-marie told me! :left:

@Cois : Yes, I couldn't bring myself to just splat him p:

Cois 17. November 2008, 21:14

awww although the story is really confusing :confused:

Furie 18. November 2008, 06:04

It's about when I escaped the government facility that created me in an attempt to create the perfect human being. They failed. I've never been human. I'm something better.

Cois 18. November 2008, 08:12

Giant sandwich? :chef:

Furie 18. November 2008, 08:20

I'd love one, thanks mate. :yes:

Cois 18. November 2008, 22:37

You ARE one :chef:

rose-marie 18. November 2008, 22:38

:eyes: That's not what I said... :left:

clean 18. November 2008, 23:32

:cool: Story! Very :cool:

Dacotah 20. November 2008, 17:16

Splat Splat
:yikes:

Cois 20. November 2008, 22:24

:insane: someone's pizza fell

theoddbod 21. November 2008, 07:58

Pizzas, giant sandwiches...why does this story make you think of food, Cois? :sherlock:

@Clean : Thanks! :o:

Cois 21. November 2008, 08:35

I have no idea p: it must be something to do with my childhood :left:

funz81 21. November 2008, 08:51

You were a pizza for too many halloweens, Clint. But at least the girls biting ya, eh? :wink:

Dacotah 21. November 2008, 08:52

Hi Mart :smile:

Hi Cois

Hi Fanny

funz81 21. November 2008, 08:53

hi iMum :love:

Dacotah 21. November 2008, 08:54

:love:

Cois 21. November 2008, 16:45

Fan.. They only licked my toppings off :left:.
hi Carol :D

theoddbod 21. November 2008, 20:52

hi Carol :D

Dacotah 21. November 2008, 21:00

Hi guys.

Suntana 24. November 2008, 22:54

When he leapt into space ... I thought he was going to Wake Up a second later as he landed face down on the floor ... having fallen from his bunkbed.

Cois 27. November 2008, 06:11

Experienced eh :sherlock:

Furie 27. November 2008, 09:02

A couple of million stories like that on the web by "artistic" teens. :lol:

theoddbod 27. November 2008, 13:47

Closest thing of mine to that is probably Rumble or Viewpoint

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