Squashed
Friday, 20. March 2009, 21:14:55
Aldernak pushed desperately between the platform zombies, made a dash for it, and succeeded in squeezing onto the train at the cost of only a grazed hand. There wasn't much room to move afterwards, squashed awkwardly against the doors with his butt pressed against something he preferred not to think about. But at least this time he wasn't nose-to-underarm with someone, and it beat the hell out of the time he'd spent the whole journey trying not to stumble face-first into giant man-boobs.
Suddenly the lights went out and the train stopped. The carriage filled with an annoyed nervous silence - people fidgeted, a child cried.
In the unexpected darkness Aldernak found himself staring through the window into a pair of sulphurous eyes. As others appeared around the carriage, there was a collective gasp from the passengers.
Then there was a sudden wrenching of metal, and somebody screamed.
They weren't the last...










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Javaen # 20. March 2009, 22:00
"Ask, and ye shall receive".
Only a hand scrape?
Good news, the traffic on the train will be somewhat lighter tomorrow!
Phantom2 # 20. March 2009, 22:26
clean # 20. March 2009, 23:07
theoddbod # 20. March 2009, 23:32
rose-marie # 21. March 2009, 12:36
angel292005 # 21. March 2009, 13:52
theoddbod # 21. March 2009, 16:11
Dacotah # 21. March 2009, 17:38
By the tags: tunnel, darkness, story, series
I'd say it's a Part One of something.
Looking forward to the others.
Cois # 21. March 2009, 21:41
flamingo-rinse # 22. March 2009, 07:50
Zaphira # 22. March 2009, 16:07
Very descriptive indeed!
Cois # 22. March 2009, 20:58
flamingo-rinse # 22. March 2009, 21:03
<smiles, happy in the knowledge that he never has to go there again if he doesn't want to>
theoddbod # 22. March 2009, 22:33
flamingo-rinse # 22. March 2009, 23:49
theoddbod # 23. March 2009, 00:05
It's bad enough walking around strange places like this :
Javaen # 23. March 2009, 00:20
Zaphira # 23. March 2009, 05:15
theoddbod # 23. March 2009, 20:57
flamingo-rinse # 23. March 2009, 21:04
LebMAT # 5. April 2009, 17:29
Dacotah # 22. April 2009, 11:25
Javaen # 22. April 2009, 12:55
Dacotah # 22. April 2009, 17:23
Javaen # 23. April 2009, 03:18
Dacotah # 23. April 2009, 03:42
theoddbod # 23. April 2009, 07:05
Dacotah # 23. April 2009, 07:07
Javaen # 23. April 2009, 09:07
flamingo-rinse # 23. April 2009, 09:21
Dacotah # 23. April 2009, 12:29
Javaen # 23. April 2009, 12:55
Dacotah # 23. April 2009, 16:12
Javaen # 23. April 2009, 16:20
Dacotah # 23. April 2009, 16:25
Now will you say why Mart isn't around?
theoddbod # 23. April 2009, 17:23
Javaen # 23. April 2009, 17:29
I just know what you've said.... And the rest has been left in my imagination. And I understand only the being happy.... Very happy part.
I never claimed to know a thing. And I hope you aren't upset.
Zaphira # 23. April 2009, 17:41
Phantom2 # 23. April 2009, 17:46
Dacotah # 23. April 2009, 18:14
None of my business why, if you want to tell us you will if you don't you won't.
We all miss having you around.
Sorry if it sounded like gossip.
Dacotah # 23. April 2009, 18:27
theoddbod # 23. April 2009, 20:47
Dacotah # 23. April 2009, 20:55
Javaen # 23. April 2009, 21:14
Furie # 24. April 2009, 09:03
Dacotah # 24. April 2009, 09:35
theoddbod # 24. April 2009, 14:41
Furie # 24. April 2009, 14:50
*does the Tom Jones dance*
Cois # 24. April 2009, 18:48
Furie # 24. April 2009, 20:38