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snowflakes behind the window

snowflakes behind the window
few of them falling into the groud,without slowing down
one of them,brush against my hand flowing my finder
and said take care of me , i'm just one of them
next life , i will change me in water
without her
i took him into my freezer
he said thank i just need one more day
because my girlfriend will falling only tomorrow
the next day ,i'm climbing to the last floor
snowflake freeze my finger for a last time
warm up my heart, and fall in the water

next dayregarderces cils...

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wow, so nice poem with beautiful words...

By brokenheartvn, # 8. October 2007, 10:05:34

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So sweet.... :o:

this poem could makes human freez hearts become melting, for sure... Thanks for create such a wonderful art... :up:

By maria2309, # 9. October 2007, 20:18:30

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THANKS A LOT SEE YOU

By thery, # 9. October 2007, 21:25:07

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hey good poem after reading it ,i am already frozen

By afreen rahman, # 11. October 2007, 11:52:38

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perhaps can be Lappish in my preceding life :pingu:

By thery, # 11. October 2007, 12:36:32

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