徐志摩---[偶然]---英譯
Monday, 13. July 2009, 04:13:00
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試著把徐志摩的《偶然》譯成英文,這算是draft,還不滿意,改天再看能不能修飾得更好。
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偶然
作者: 徐志摩
我是天空裡的一片雲,
偶爾投影在你的波心
你不必驚異,
更無須歡喜
在轉瞬間消滅了蹤影。
你我相逢在黑夜的海上,
你有你的,我有我的,方向;
你記得也好,
最好你忘掉,
在這交會時互放的光亮。
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By Chance
I am a cloud in the sky
that on occasions casts a shadow in your mind
you need not startle
nor take delight
for I’d soon vanish out of sight
You and I met at sea in the darkness of night
you have your destination, I have mine
You may remember
though it’d be best to forget
we glowed as our paths crossed and brightly shined
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Translation last updated on 2009.7.27.
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試著把徐志摩的《偶然》譯成英文,這算是draft,還不滿意,改天再看能不能修飾得更好。
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偶然
作者: 徐志摩
我是天空裡的一片雲,
偶爾投影在你的波心
你不必驚異,
更無須歡喜
在轉瞬間消滅了蹤影。
你我相逢在黑夜的海上,
你有你的,我有我的,方向;
你記得也好,
最好你忘掉,
在這交會時互放的光亮。
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By Chance
I am a cloud in the sky
that on occasions casts a shadow in your mind
you need not startle
nor take delight
for I’d soon vanish out of sight
You and I met at sea in the darkness of night
you have your destination, I have mine
You may remember
though it’d be best to forget
we glowed as our paths crossed and brightly shined
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Translation last updated on 2009.7.27.
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