Falling
Thursday, 25. September 2008, 17:52:50
Falling
By Winterdawn
Cruise into my world of darkness
Sail against the wind and across the seas
Feel my sorrow tearing me down
When I whimper helplessly and drown
Lend me your hand before I sink
And pull me out of the brink
Pass me a drink of happiness
Then I'll be eternally blessed
I cry when I think about you
And I don't know what to do
I see you when I close my eyes
As I face your heart of ice
You stabbed me hard
And left me a bleeding heart
You tore me into pieces
And widened the spaces
My love for you still lingers
While in pain, my body shivers
My blind soul still roams
As I sail in a tattered boat
I guess nothing will ever matter
With all my dreams shattered
Stars crossed my dark empty sky
Leaving vanishing golden trails behind
Shining like the heaven's bridge
Absorbing light away from my seige
Now I stand alone and become dull
As I watch everything turn to null
The light breeze escapes my breath
Even if I stood tall upon Earth's depth
Darkness slowly fills my empty gap
As I fall into a never ending lapse















BabyJay99 # 4. October 2008, 14:00
winterdawn # 4. October 2008, 18:27
Its been a long time! Thanks for dropping by! I hope you liked this poem?
BabyJay99 # 4. October 2008, 18:38
winterdawn # 5. October 2008, 06:02
Captivevet # 6. October 2008, 14:40
Tyler
winterdawn # 7. October 2008, 13:25
Captivevet # 7. October 2008, 19:06
winterdawn # 8. October 2008, 04:02
Captivevet # 8. October 2008, 13:05
Another Wednesday. I have my coffee and getting ready for work.
Devilbesideyou # 10. October 2008, 12:25
hahas im just joking but we are forming a band
your poem is cool like always
your poem reminds me of mine,the last lines kind of match..i don't even remember it's title, i wrote it long back.. it was something like
The light breeze escapes my breath
Even if I stood tall upon Earth's depth
Darkness slowly fills my empty soul
As I fall into a never ending circle of fire
I burn in tormentation
Oblivion calls me
I WANT TO ANSWER!
did i use my signature emoticon? i guess not dammit! how come..here are plenty of ones because i seem to have not used any of them earlier
Captivevet # 10. October 2008, 15:06
So listen now to what I say:
Get yourself an electric guitar,
And learn how to play"!
winterdawn # 11. October 2008, 06:22
hahahaha as entertaining as always
thanks for the compliment too
I cant believe the first two lines of my last paragraph are exactly the same as yours
@ Captivevet:
Oh that is a nice paragraph
Captivevet # 11. October 2008, 06:49
Devilbesideyou # 11. October 2008, 18:17
Oh yeah, i think 'banding' is a cool thing but we're not gonna do as professionals,just quenching the passion for music
Oh yeah i'd love but things are little complicated for now i am settled in different city which makes extremly difficult for us to jam together but at the moment im in my hometown..we're having kind of vacation:yes:
Sure! I'll let you know of it!! We might not hit the studio that fast but we're likely to hit the stage very soon
Oh yes that was compliment
Well,not exactly same but the lines were very very similar! It's clear as the day from the verse that you have begun to think like the Devil
eek! My comment has gotten longer than THE GREAT WALL
Captivevet # 11. October 2008, 19:03
I'm a man of wealth and taste...".
winterdawn # 13. October 2008, 14:41
Hey!
winterdawn # 13. October 2008, 14:57
Ah well, I'm sure you'll get used to that new city very soon
I think that everyone expresses their feelings in many different ways, and mine is the dark and cold way
Anyway, Travian is a great game, online strategy game
Captivevet # 13. October 2008, 19:02
Devilbesideyou # 13. October 2008, 19:05
No no no! Ofcourse not because of the band thing.Our un-named band is virginly innocent!
The Reason well it's a big 'hehe'!! Infact it's biggest hehe of 2008 for me,oh yes that big
oh Commonnnn! 'My silent love' doesn't sound that emo..LOL NOO! My mind is too civilized to go for emo(attitude,hairstyles,piercings,tattoos) hmmm fashion? wait! I need a second thought
Yeah,i think the same way.Even earth expresses it's feeling but i don't know yet how do i express mine..through silence? Im hard chapter
I have registered on travian,Uername:MinutesAlone im on server 5 and northeast village. I have yet to begin to play though...
Captivevet # 13. October 2008, 19:09
winterdawn # 16. October 2008, 16:15
OMG!!! AWESOM!!!! hahahaha welcome to the world of TRAVIAN
First: here's a guide(for Romans) on how to become rich and stable in the first two months of gameplay
Second: here's a tool for you to keep track of the progress of other players and alliances, there are also statistics about the players and maps that change according to your coordinates input. this will help you a lot when you got your own troops and needs to start raiding other villages to get resources
Third: this is a travian world analyzer, it also helps you keep track of alliance, village, and player activities, updated everyday
Those are three very useful tools I found in my recent research
Now to your english exam
Your emo side shall be awaken soon....
Anyway, you'll probably get a message from me soon in Travian
winterdawn # 16. October 2008, 16:18
A very good combat indeed
By the way, I just visited your "about" page and there are still many many links about your previous blog posts, cant see the one you're talking about
Devilbesideyou # 17. October 2008, 23:10
My co-ordinate happens to be [234,133] It seems so:right:
Well Well Well...I told ya,it's not highschool english.It's i don't know, i have so many complains with english! We're confined to a single point,they don't let us float freely and a free thinking person like me suffocates when is bounded to a subject matter.Literature is funny,you are question like 'A child is father of a man' Explain!! I had kind of heard that line in class but english class is my sleeping class
We did form a band but it was a weak decison...I will be away and my absence is going to hault everything hmm i guess it's going to be little complicated issue.Oh yes,i've heard of Boys Like Girls..i've heard few of their songs and all of them were equally good! paced Great Escape is cool but i prefer Thunder
Mum's awake! Im DOOMED!
Cya!
Stay Cool!!
Captivevet # 17. October 2008, 23:46
http://Lansing.com/etf/bigmouthwoman.m3u
winterdawn # 18. October 2008, 17:40
"A child is father of a man."
Yeah, Thunder is nice
winterdawn # 18. October 2008, 17:42
OK Thanks!!
Captivevet # 18. October 2008, 17:44
Devilbesideyou # 18. October 2008, 21:18
Cool Cool! Sounds to me like you get adequate time to play online games i never get time to go crazy with the game DAMN!
Cleverly have you answered that paradoxical statement
Five Minutes to Midnight is delicious song...heard this one,'Learning To Fall'? I guess it's stupid thing to ask to BYLG fan such question...I like that one too! It's frigging cool song
Time for laughter--
I vividly remember when my holidays began but i have absolutely no idea when uni will resume
As we jam,the rhythm gets stronger
winterdawn # 19. October 2008, 05:46
And of course,Learning to Fall!!!
Ah well you never fail to entertain me
Devilbesideyou # 19. October 2008, 17:40
Lucky you! This is my heaviest year
We're not gonna play heavy metal stuffs...Just rock stuffs little heavier than BYLG,they sound somewhat acoustic to me
I don't know anyone who doesnt even bother to find out when school starts again after vacation
Well..Now you know one
CyaZ
Captivevet # 19. October 2008, 18:00