I am not a gift...I am a surprise :)

"Love is like a violin. The music may stop now and then, but the strings remain forever."

Грустное лето.

Wednesday, July 15, 2009 7:20:41 AM

Sorry,my dear English speaking friends.This post is in Russian as it is my poem written in Russian.
So...it is only for those who can understand it.


Это стихотоворение посвящено моему любимому.
Глядя в окно загородного дома на мокрую лужайку на полянке,на садовый столик со стульями,на которые вряд ли кто отважится сесть в такую погоду он сказал:"Грустно мокнет барбекю"
Мне так понравилась эта фраза.В ней столько экспрессии, чно она была достойна быть в стихах.
Вот что у меня получилось.

Лето,лето...ждёшь как света
Среди тьмы зимы седой...
Уж июль,а зноя нету,
Всё покрылось пеленой.

Ветви свесили берёзы,
Скорбно смотрят маки вниз,
У сосны с иголок слёзы
Вниз струятся как с ресниц.

Разлохмачена дождями
Спит ворона на суку,
И у дома на поляне
Грустно мокнет барбекю

Скрылась под водой дорожка,
Мокрый хмель увил плетень.
Сладко спит у печки кошка,
Кошке снится жаркий день.

The cry of my soulStormy weather

Comments

Tigralas Wednesday, July 15, 2009 7:31:27 AM

Я не знаю что сказать, но мне хорошо и грустно от таких строчек...

Sunfloweryulenka Wednesday, July 15, 2009 7:33:45 AM

Ничего не говори smile

Tamil Wednesday, July 15, 2009 9:32:13 AM

awww

Sunfloweryulenka Wednesday, July 15, 2009 12:33:04 PM

Tamil,do not say,that you understood:)

Tamil Wednesday, July 15, 2009 2:19:15 PM

It is for no English translation.

Sunfloweryulenka Wednesday, July 15, 2009 4:46:24 PM

hum...i'll think about it:)Maybe i manage to make english version,who knows...smile

Tamil Wednesday, July 15, 2009 4:55:57 PM

rezanov Wednesday, July 15, 2009 6:07:20 PM

better days will come, with blue and clean skies, i am sure :-)

Sunfloweryulenka Wednesday, July 15, 2009 6:09:04 PM

smile Thank you for giving a hope...pity that it can be in Autumn only smile

Tigralas Wednesday, July 15, 2009 7:01:35 PM

Осенью всегда можно убежать в Лето smile

OlgaOlgita Wednesday, July 15, 2009 7:35:47 PM

Вот....Какой стих... Приятный...
И я только поняла, как давно я не читала стихи...

Sunfloweryulenka Wednesday, July 15, 2009 7:50:57 PM

it is an English version.
I tried my best.
Sorry for mistakes )

we are waiting for the summer
as at darkness wait for light
And the rain as crazy drummer
Brings us cold all day and night

Trees let down their brunches
Poppies bowed their heads
Rain around cries and crunches
Spreading down its heavy threads

A crow sleeps with shaggy feathers
And all around is sad and wet
A barbeque that mourns and shivers
Still haves the hope for the best.

The water hides the road, aspires
To take our wishes far away…
A cat sleeps near the oven fire
And dreams of nice and sunny day

Sunfloweryulenka Wednesday, July 15, 2009 7:52:16 PM

Спасибо,Оля smile Вот такое летнее настроение smile

Sunfloweryulenka Wednesday, July 15, 2009 7:52:44 PM

Убежать в лето всегда можно...даже зимой smile

OlgaOlgita Wednesday, July 15, 2009 8:18:18 PM

Great translation by the way...happy

Sunfloweryulenka Wednesday, July 15, 2009 8:27:44 PM

Not the same words,but meaning and feeling is the same

Tamil Wednesday, July 15, 2009 11:31:46 PM

Thanks. up

Sunfloweryulenka Thursday, July 16, 2009 3:26:35 AM

you are welcome,I did it because of you,if you can show mistakes-i will be thankful!

Tamil Thursday, July 16, 2009 4:10:50 AM

Originally posted by Olgita:

Great translation by the way...

wink

Sunfloweryulenka Thursday, July 16, 2009 4:38:30 AM

wow o

Tamil Thursday, July 16, 2009 4:59:36 AM

bigsmile

rezanov Thursday, July 16, 2009 12:36:28 PM

forgot to add:
very nice painting, don't know if you painted it, but since there's a lot of works here by you, i wonder if this one belongs to you too..very nice, indeed.

Sunfloweryulenka Friday, July 17, 2009 2:35:30 AM

Thanks,but this one is not mine :)And I do not even know the author of it,it was founded in the hyperspace of internet smile

valentin savinvalsavin Sunday, July 19, 2009 8:03:23 PM

Юленька, доброй ночи!
Как я могу забыть Вас. Это не возможно. Просто я был занят и долго не появлялся в инете.
Стихотворение мне очень понравилось. Сделано на хорошем уровне. Легко читается и, как говорится, в струю. Пора дождей прошла, вот уже и жаркое солнце. Только бы жара не зашкаливала.
Перевод тоже на уровне.
Всех Вам благ и дальнейших творческих свершений.

Sunfloweryulenka Sunday, July 19, 2009 8:17:48 PM

Вечер добрый,Валентин :)Спасибо smile Прошло полгода и...вот мы уже и опять на ВЫ smile
Насчёт жары...так хочется,чтобы зашкалило хоть на недельку!!!!

valentin savinvalsavin Monday, July 20, 2009 7:09:09 AM

Насчёт Вы, может я перестраховался. Тем не менее, рад общению. Всё ещё впереди. Хочется нормальной погоды, но в то же время и покупаться и позагорать.
До встречи и всего доброго!cheers

Andy Hermawan Prakosoandy1411 Saturday, July 25, 2009 6:50:52 PM

Wonderful poem. I hope i can read the original, but i cant. It must be better.

Sunfloweryulenka Sunday, July 26, 2009 2:27:21 AM

спасибо,Валь...а погода сейчас прекрасная smile

Sunfloweryulenka Sunday, July 26, 2009 2:32:53 AM

Thank you, Andy.They are both original,just written on the same topic.smile
Of course russian is a bit better as i can
use more different words and make less mistakes :)But i tried my best in both!

Andy Hermawan Prakosoandy1411 Sunday, July 26, 2009 6:19:37 PM

Oh... Sure... Thank 4 ur translation. So i can read it.. smile

Sunfloweryulenka Sunday, July 26, 2009 8:48:15 PM

to read about sad summer? ...now weather is much better...

valentin savinvalsavin Monday, July 27, 2009 7:41:24 PM

Юленька, доброй или уже спокойной ночи!
Вспомнил про твоё стихотворение и решил внести свою "лепту" в следующие строчки:
Still has a hope for its best.
And dreams of mice and sunny day.
Это не значит, что так и должно быть. Автору виднее, тем более, что у тебя всё в норме.
Только без обид?!
Всех благ и самого хорошего в жизни!

daxonmacs Tuesday, July 28, 2009 3:45:16 AM

Nice poem ( I had to read the translation ) and picture, Yulia.

Sunfloweryulenka Tuesday, July 28, 2009 3:59:38 AM

Спасибо smile Какие обиды,что ты...даже интересно.Но всё же останется как было smile Мечта о мышке приземлённая и прозаичная, как мечта о бифштексе smile А тут было просто состояние души...smile

Sunfloweryulenka Tuesday, July 28, 2009 4:04:24 AM

Hi Dax! Have not seen you for a long time. How are you?!Always glad to see my old friends.....it means that we have somebody who remember you even not coming :)And it is good.
We do not need to speak all the time,but if we remember somebody-it is enough to feel that we have real friend smile

daxonmacs Tuesday, July 28, 2009 4:06:49 AM

I'm good thanks, how are you?
Cloudy here as well.
I'm also awaiting the more sunny days smile

Sunfloweryulenka Tuesday, July 28, 2009 4:56:06 AM

Here are rainy but very warm days :)We are always waiting for the sun...sun is rear in our city...
I am ok,thanks for asking smile

rezanov Tuesday, July 28, 2009 8:35:44 AM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CjXvptz3pW8

it will come ...

Sunfloweryulenka Tuesday, July 28, 2009 9:42:50 AM

thank you:)pity i cannot see it from cellphone,will have a look in the evening.ok?tenha um bom dia!

rezanov Tuesday, July 28, 2009 10:56:20 AM

ok.
Julia, i would like that you treat by "tu" instead of "você".
so "tenha um bom dia" turns into "tem um bom dia" smile

Sunfloweryulenka Tuesday, July 28, 2009 3:26:32 PM

thank you :)i studied Brazilian portuguese.There is no tu there,only voce,that is why i do not know it.Now will know:)

rezanov Tuesday, July 28, 2009 3:54:52 PM

Interessante, não tinha reparado que eles não usavam o "tu".
Eu não gosto do tratamento por "você", é formal, embora se deva usar quando não se conhece a pessoa e essa pessoa é mais velha.

Gosto que me tratem por "ты" smile smile

valentin savinvalsavin Tuesday, July 28, 2009 6:44:19 PM

Согласен на все сто. То была моя глупая шутка.
А где портрет или аватар?!
Удачи и до новой встречи!

Sunfloweryulenka Tuesday, July 28, 2009 7:34:31 PM

Ну что ты smile Вовсе не глупая. Видимо это стандар, всем кажется,что кошка мечтает о мышке smile А на самом деле она может мечтает о коте smile
Про какой портрет идёт речь?Опера дурит иногда,может в этом дело.. smile

Tigralas Tuesday, July 28, 2009 7:41:54 PM

2yulenka lol lol lol

Sunfloweryulenka Tuesday, July 28, 2009 7:46:47 PM

Noe,obrigada por música. É tão bela!

Sunfloweryulenka Tuesday, July 28, 2009 7:47:28 PM

Tigra,wink

Tyler Parke YoungCaptivevet Wednesday, July 29, 2009 11:10:59 AM

There are no mistakes, only improvisations!coffee

Sunfloweryulenka Wednesday, July 29, 2009 5:11:43 PM

Hi Tyler.:)I was speaking about mistakes in Portuguese language:)
How are you?Better now?Where do you live?

Tyler Parke YoungCaptivevet Wednesday, July 29, 2009 7:13:59 PM

I am still in Grand Rapids Michigan, USA. For how much longer, I cannot say. I am much better now and can sit down without pain.coffee up

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